Reviews for The Weakness in Me
Ultrawoman chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
So not only are you awesome at Alice in Wonderland fic, you also excel at Sparrabeth? This is one of the best Sparrabeth fics I ever read and I lve it!

I really didn't know that first part was a dream until Lizzie awoke, that was very well done. Then her liking that only Jack calls her Lizzie, and knowing she wanted him to kiss her, even though she knew she shouldn't want it. Hell, Jack knew HE shouldn't want it either, but he did.

Oh, I could just read this over and over, and be so happy - and I probably will! ;)

Ultra
VampChick76 chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
I love the one-shot! Amazing!

~Xela
Spunkalovely chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Aw. (: The details in the dream that Elizabeth had were AMAZING. Awesome writing. (: (:
NicolinaN chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Oh! Hot, slow, sensous, and hot. :)

Noticed a missing word here and there but great storytelling.

Nic.
Zayz chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Admittedly very slightly corny at some points, but your laidback style and fun, smile-worthy Jack forgave all those little bumps. So, ultimately, well done. I applaud you. :)

Much love,

Zay
shan21 chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
I really, really enjoyed that. Such a nice, weird (in the best way) little story. It said a lot without being overly long. Some people just *get* this pairing, and you're one of them. It's so easy to make JE stories just awful, and yours has managed to be wonderful :)
Rory4 chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
I'm always a stickler for good titles, and the title of this one-shot really appealed to me. It's an amazing fit with the fic, and that's not always true. I like that it has meaning. And as for the story, what can I say? It was great. I loved how you started out with the dream, which was so realistic, and I loved how you ended it. It's going on my favorites.

-Rory4
JustAnotherAuthorDurping chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
Wonderful one-shot, one of my faves.

:D

Keep up the great work, and long live Sparrabeth. BP
Florencia7 chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
It was a truly wonderful story! Well written. I really REALLY liked it!
ZekksGoddess chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
Lovely. Just lovely. :)
KayleeG chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
That was very nice. I really liked it.
EvilKath chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
I liked it a lot... very sweet and charming.
Scourge of Nemo chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
Happy happy happy... *sings and dances like a little kid*

...Well written Sparrabeth seems to have that affect on me. Poor me ~_~ Every time I read Sparrabeth, I go insane all over again. But I can't stop reading it!
Michelle chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
sweet, very sweet.

p.s. love your pen name (no one cries they won't return).
Sleepy Lotus chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
very nice, very sweet. i do wish jack had been a bit more of a cad though..lol. good job!
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