Absolutely brilliant work.

Stay Awesome!

Vasquez cliff? The doom song? INVADER ZIM YO!

I bet Arnold is just like WTF right now.

YES! GOOD FOR YOU ARNOLD YOU FOUND YOUR PARENTS!

I am in tears now. Best. story. ever.

Sniff... poor Arnold!

I have a teddy... .

LOL! Curly...

I cried... very touching chapter.

YES! FIND YOUR PARENTS ARNOLD! (snif) SO TOUCHING!

typo* argh I mean to say "on ", but at that time, the device I wrote my review on deleted it. Not even a chance to edit the commentary. Oh well. Again, I look forward to reading your other works :)

I saw this through the HA wikia and was initially skeptical in reading your fanfic (also due to my nearly 9 year absence of reading and writing fanfics of my favorite shows on ). I must say out of all of the TJM fanfics I read, I really like yours the most! You had almost everyone stay in character as they were in the series (does that make sense?) that I can see this story becoming the TJM movie itself! I can practically hear them speak when I read their parts. You did an awesome job! :)

nice start

Okay, so here's a point where you just skim over a lot of information that you could use more effectively.

""Not so good." Arnold shook his head. "I had the weirdest dream about this crazy guy named Herb. He kept squeezing my head, trying to see if money would come out of it. When it didn't, he locked me in a box and forgot about me.""

Rather than saying this, start with Arnold's dream. Describe it in detail rather than having Arnold tell us what happened. Show, don't tell. First rule of writing. You've got the makings of a great writer.