Reviews for Battle of Aetas
Guest chapter 12 . 4/28
OMFG, the mental image of Kaylee tickling Harry, then being discovered by half the crew had me in stitches
Melikalilly chapter 13 . 10/4/2018
I love this story
Some1Else2 chapter 13 . 4/28/2014
I really liked where you were going with this story and The Awakening. I'd like to pick both of these up and continue them. Maybe combine them with Raul Fictious' HP/Firefly, as I have his permission to do so. What do you think?
Ron is NOT EVIL chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Hey! Well your story had promise, but...

Seriously? Evil Ron? *Laughs Hysterically* that's so ridiculous! I mean, I can handle Ron as a jerk and thick headed and, for a better word, stupid. The reason of that is, although it is still shallow and shows a complete lack of understanding of his character, it can be in-character, if there is the right situation. Because, let's face it. Ron isn't brilliantly smart, nor full of tact.

But what your doing is plain mindless bashing, without cause or reason. It's not funny, nor dramatic, nor smart. It makes you look like a petty child who has no understanding of the characters. No, Ron's not an idealistic hero, or a dreamy intelligent hunk. He's a normal person with faults and flaws, and strengths and...I'm ranting...Sorry...

(H/Hr, really?)

Meow
Black Mad Hatter chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
hi
dead feather chapter 11 . 9/21/2011
This has very many plots to follow.

The whole Harry/Voldemort thing that's suddenly on a backburner. What was up with Harry's scar? What was that thing that scared the villagers and why are the villagers even there? What happened to earth to be like this? Who put Harry in the coffin? What is the last thing he remembers?

Who is this Luna Lovegood that hired the team and why haven't they told Harry about her?

What was up with that package that was delivered after fifty years? What bit the captain?

Will this be Hermione/or River? What was that thing that took hermione? and tons of other questions.

I know most of them are probably answered in time but right now there's just too much going on for this to be an enjoyable story. I like the idea and the start but then it got way too complicated to follow.
ironhair chapter 13 . 8/26/2011
the last chapter was a darn cop out. BAH, I'm pissed.

Overall a 4/5 but I'll take away a gorram 1.5 for the incomplete end, not handling any of the issues AT ALL. H's past, Luna Lovegood, the exodus, Earth, the animal, the wizards on Earth, the wizards on the core planets/outer worlds... etc etc

2.5/5.
ironhair chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
A fan of firefly and this was a nice bridge b/w the two stories.

Looking forward to see how H/GR's disappearance affected the wizard world.

Continuing with reading the rest.
WhiteElfElder chapter 13 . 7/15/2011
This has been great so far. I hope that Harry is able to rebuild his magic before facing Voldemort or whatever that thing is that seems to be like Voldemort. I guess the curse scar was never dealt with properly? Is that why the planet was labeled as destroyed, because the evil that couldn't or wouldn't die?
WhiteElfElder chapter 7 . 7/15/2011
Damn it, Voldemort is still around?
WhiteElfElder chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Fracking Ron, no doubt he is this new heir to Voldemort. Spoiled little shite.
Celexs Draconia chapter 12 . 10/5/2010
This could be a very interesting story, its the first time i have seen river Compared to Hermione and would love to see what you do next.

Cel
Deathly Phoneix chapter 13 . 4/26/2010
Brilliant please get started on this story soon i cant wait to see the next update!
bananacupcakes chapter 13 . 2/17/2010
Please continue :]
CymruAlteran chapter 13 . 10/17/2009
hi

great story hope you update

cymrualteran
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