Really good. I like how you describe the desperation on Marluxia's part, and the almost empathy on Namine's part.

When I finished reading this story, I realized with surprise that tears were streaming down my face. This was the best writing and story I have ever read. Masterful and simple, powerful and sad. Wonderful.

This was lovely. Exactly what I was looking for in a Marluxia x Namine fic.

I've recently gotten interested in Kingdom Hearts again & incidentally, my favorite pairing is anyone with Naminé :]

I loved your story so much; it really hit home because I was so convinced with this. I hope you'll write more stories because your two one-shots are amazing!

I liked the recurring themes that were in there and the conversations that broke up what was happening. It gave the fic an almost surreal atmosphere.

I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Wow, that was breath-taking. I loved every word of it. Amazing job.

A friend got me into this pairing earlier today and you write it very well. Excellent work.

Very sad; I almost wanted to cry; not because it was bad, but because how sad it is. :/ Very nice writing.

I found that entertaining... As well as the little tidbit you put in there. I would love for there to be more than just three Namine and Marluxia lemons... They're so good...*Is also a sucker for Namine x Marluxia stuff*

Yeah, that's really interesting about that.

Nice Ending!

Strange, but well written I think all the same. The reoccuring idea of "blue" played out nicely throughout everything, and the way the story came out, with a flashblack preluding a current event, was really well done. Keep up the good work.

This is a very deep and emotional piece and although it's a sad story I'm glad you got the characters spot on, leaving emotion out of places where need be. It shows a lot of talent _

Pefect. Some people give Nobodies too much emotion, and that gets on my nerves...Although Axel always seems to feel which is weird...But that's besides the point! This was perfectly done, Marluxia has no heart therefore he doesn't care about what he does. There is no caring. Thank You!

(It took me two days to try to figure out how to write a proper review to this. That's a compliment; I wanted it to be a good review.)

First off, I'd like to say that this fic deeply freaked me out. I'm still not sure whether I like it or not. But it was so well-written that I am, at least, in love with the quality of the writing. Even the fact that it was able to freak me out so much just goes to show how well it was written, because most other writing, even the most graphic noncon, doesn't usually do that.

Also even though you say that you're a sucker for Marluxia/Namine, you don't excuse Marluxia's actions by making them look like a romantic "crime of passion," like most writers try to do in rape!fic. Just because you don't try to make it look so sweet and friendly, it's that much of a better story. And I do like this better with all the disturbingness in place than I would have if it hadn't seemed so real.

So, great job. It's beautifully written, the descriptions are perfect, and despite the fact that it's freaky I think I do like it after all.

Very deep, I enjoyed reading this story.