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Guest chapter 2 . 12/1/2019 More Polaris and wolfstar! |
kittyzero chapter 1 . 7/2/2012 Ohgoodness. The perfection of this story! I love it! |
Alex Blain chapter 1 . 1/27/2012 I loved the plot. But question. I speak a little of French and I noticed you had put something different then "J t'aime" which means "I love you" in French, so I was wondering how you found the translation. Also, have you had this story BETA'd? I noticed quite a lot of mistakes. |
ILoveYouLikeNiallLovesNandos chapter 1 . 8/20/2011 This was soo cute! Ah, lunch table conversations...They shall start again on Monday! First day of school...first year oh high school... Do you kno what it's like to be a freshman? Scary! Can I use the Sirius dying by drapes quote? |
Quite the Gotham Villain chapter 2 . 3/4/2011 dont worry, people yell at me about my french all the time too. heck, even my best friends yell at me. so, you're not alone |
Quite the Gotham Villain chapter 1 . 3/4/2011 awesome! just one little thing, "i love you" more commonly is "je t'aime" |
Gryffindor Glory chapter 2 . 2/15/2011 I love the fic polaris is so cute and harry. I like the way you changed the end so they don't die. It always makes me sad when people die at the end of fics. Thanks for the amazing fic and keep it up! |
Lara chapter 1 . 3/30/2010 Just wanted to let you know: Sirius Black was actually killed when Bellatrix Lestrange used Avada Kadavra on him. Since it's a killing curse he'd died and the veil, being one connected to the after life, took him. /watch?vd3DPUywYTt0&featurerelated |
HikariFighter chapter 1 . 7/23/2009 I don't want to be a smart-ass, but if it's 1983, Sirius (and the rest of the Marauders) should be 23, not 25. Such a cute fic! I just love your stories, mate D |
Little Miss Distruction chapter 2 . 6/25/2009 Your French is excellent. I'm in 2nd yr AP French and you verbs and tenses are correct and everything! Great Job XD! |
ms. polaris black chapter 1 . 5/8/2008 i love your fic...) you know you ruined any child of remus and sirius for me...i fell in love with polaris, it helps a little it that she has my same "name" hehehe..but lovely little fic ! I love it! |
Lizzy chapter 2 . 4/6/2008 What's wrong with you? There are people whose first language is French, they go through all the effort to help you and write long reviews... but instead of being grateful you insult them? I won't say my French is perfect but I know for sure that lovers don't address each other with "vous" but "tu". Please learn to appreciate constructive criticism. By the way, I liked your story. I just got very angry when I saw how you behaved towards those people who wanted to help you. Very rude of you. |
MarieEsmeraldaDumbledore-Black chapter 2 . 4/2/2008 i loved the sub script in your after note nice message also i think that maybe you should continue with this story but take it in a different way as in the fact that maybe Sirius told Dumbledore about Peter being a deatheater and then the Lupin-Black family along with the Potters are on the hit list then by some unfortunate misshap the potters are still killed but harry grows up with the Lupin-Blacks and idk convinces the malfoys to be good with Polaris' help. then maybe some romance between her and the Weasley Twins and some well deserved yelling from her fathers about the ways of the young marauders maybe have the weasleys show her the map and her tell them who the marauders were. maybe incorperate lucius' death some how. lol i always got the feeling if he died earley on maybe Narcissa and Draco would have been nicer |
PeteWentz chapter 1 . 3/14/2008 This fic is just simply, wow...my eye is twitching in awe. |
Moosxaxlot chapter 1 . 3/7/2008 AH! I luffed it. Remmy and Siri kick ass together. ~Sighrus |