i found it rare for first chapter already fluffy like this. but i like it!

I really enjoyed your story. My only constructive feedback would be that we never got to enjoy their full consummation of their relationship at the end. With a mental link there was great potential for something truly intense and romantic. I was sad when it was left out. Aside from that, the storyline was interesting and it was well written. Thanks for sharing. :-)

Normally I don’t read yaoi fanfics because they tend to make me uncomfortable but I really enjoyed this book so good work

Time to reread!

Nice u had me there for a minute. I thought for sure sasuke had done it again.

Good story, very well written, mean cliffhangers!

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This was really good

I really like this so far

This is interesting

This was such a fun ride from beginning to end. I really enjoyed reading it through and I especially loved this epilogue chapter. I like the way you rounded off all your plot points so neatly and believably too! You kept the characters in character no OOC-ness and immsad its over now! Hats off to you!

I feel weird because I kiiindaaa ship Kakashi and Gaara here. Oops?

I love it when Sakura isn't portrayed as a self-obsessed bitch haha. I hope Sasuke and Naruto would be able to sort their problems out soon. It's making me sad myselfHahaha. Loving the story so far

Well, what I have read of this story has been very good. But now I have arrived at the subject of Itachi.. and as he is my favorite character and I recently converted to ItaNaru (even though I still like SasuNaru) it is too painful to see Itachi really being evilunfortunately I won't be finishing this story because I can't bear it.. maybe I'll just read the last chapter.

oh my jashin. you had me crying. wincing. biting my nails. biting my lip. laughing. awing. I love this story. !