This is so ADORABLE! And well-written! VICTOR AND VICTORIA FOR THE WIN!

*ahem*

Anyway, favorite parts:

1. YES YES YES! I loved how pointed out that Victoria found it embarassing that her mom AND DAD see her in her undercothes. Hello! AWKWARD!

2. I like how Victor studied at Oxford-it's a cool concept. Oh, Vickie. Big man on campus.

3. Loved the "well-dressed scarcrow" bit. You're very talented.

All in all, great job!

HOLY COW! I read this story over and over again and it never fails to impress me. Amazing work! Ever consider becoming a professional writer of short stories?

You describe the beuty of music in such a way that makes it magical! You capture Victoria's personality so wonderfully! I loved It!

that was so sweet!

That was a lovely little vignette. I like how you took Victoria's voice and wrote about her thoughts about the marriage-they were very in-character. The last paragraph was probably my favorite. Great job.

~ PeachBlossom19

This was wonderfully writen and very touching.

That was a very good story! You describe things so well, I swear I can feel the characters emotions. Also, you characterized them perfectly, which is a big plus! You're definately one of the top writers in this section, right up there with Playerpiano.