This is the first KKM fanfic I’ve read before and I’m definitely not disappointed. Thanks so much for writing this story.

Double standard writing. Now Conrad and Gwendal doesnt approve of Yuuri and Wolfram getting intimate because they are too young. And yet Wolfram getting fucked by Kyota years before, meaning much more younger, was okay. Oh yeah, right, Conrad and Gwendal has no idea it happened. Really? A younger Wolfram getting away from that without his beloved brothers knowledge, highly doubt it. Proof that you only write because you want to push that your OC is better than anyone else.

Nope, Im not being possessive with wolfram. You're making him too good. You're making Yuuri take all the blame. You're making Kyota Gary-sue. So why not to hate. Your OC is poorly written. Wolfram is OOC, and you're making everyone takes Wolfram side and making all the possible scenario and situation in favor of Wolfram and Kyota even though logically what they did is wrong.

Yuuri is right with everything. Why should Wolfram just accept he was wrong? He accepts to getting married without the proper enagegment breakup? Im started to hate Wolfram. He's not Wolfram anyomore.

Ugh, you overly praised your OC. Its disgusting. If he's really a soldier, serving the King is his first priority first and foremost before the call of the thing between his thigh. Yes, I dont like him because you build him up too perfectly. Saying he's a real person we all could relate is false, he's way tok perfect. And Im glad Wolfram relaized the things he did made a very political mess. And while I thought Wolfram is different, who would have thought he could get intimate with a person he feels nothing at all. I though he was better than to make someone hopes to nothing. I thought he made it clear that he could not love Kyota before much more now when he is inlove with Yuuri. Isn't it more crazy that he's trying to accept Kyota because he was trying to move from Yuuri? When before, there's no Yuuri involved and he cant love him. Wolfram then is not much better than a user, and only follows the call of flesh. Disappointing.

Yeah, Wolfram is not Yuuris possession and Wolfram can fuck anyone. And yet, they're technically still engaged. It's cheating! If he went and have sex with anyone, he only not destroys his family name it also like throwing shit on the Kings crown, and knowing how Wolfram loves Yuuri, he would rather die than do that. They're not a normal couple you see, they are aristocrats, in a monarchial rule. You should have read how this things work, did research before you justify Wolframs action. He's not a commoner, they dont live in a modern era, Wolfram grew in a strict rigid environment following a rule. The king is all that matters. You do know that once you're engaged whether on eastern Asia monarchy or European monarchial stand, you will get killed when they found out you have sex or got intimate with someone other than your intended. More so if its the king you cheated on. I think you even pointed this ouy when Conrad saw him and Kyota during the ball. And you even wrote it how people/soldier disrespect Yuuri when they lustfully stare Wolfram, and then you forgo all o thia just so you can justify your OC and wolframs action.
Yes, you write very nicely, but getting mad with people because they're pointing out your flaws is not a sign of being a good writer.

I dont understand. Yes, Yuuri went out to explore to answer things on his own and here Wolfram assume that Yuuri will break of the engagement seeing how Yuuri never really show any sign of more than friends affection. True. But shouldn't Wolfram wait for the final decision before he decides to give Kyota a chance and fraternitized with him. Isn't what Wolfram is doing a form of cheating cause he is STILL engaged with Yuuri, and while currently, thinking and trying to fall in love with someone is cheating on my book. Yes, Yuuri hurts him Because he cant return his feeling, something Yuuri cannot be blame for, but i was thinking that Wolfram should have waited for Yuuri's final decision before he starts 'trying' to be with Kyota. I mean, its out of respect to Yuuri and him being an aristocrat. He should have more pride than that.
I think Yuuri is still kind even after Kyota treated him like equals. Im not sure about KKM monarchial rule but in reality, Kyota should be beheaded no question ask with his blatant disrespect with his King and the king neither need to say it, it should be automatically done so.
I dont like Kyota. And Wolframs actions leading to this chapter is a great shift of his wonderful personality.

Im loving your story, but im confuse as to why wolfram hated Yuuri's world. As far as I know, Wolfram enjoyed his time whenever he was transported. He even insisted to be with them one time, anime wise. Even the light nivel never hinted of Wolfram hating anything on Yuri's world, in fact he's curious and excited like a child. Well, i guess sinc ethis a fanfiction everything could happen.

I dont mind this Kyota guy, but Im not rooting for him either.
Wolfram's attitude with Yuri was weird, its as though the moment the part where he went with Kyota, his personality did a 180 degree change.

I dont mind reading a darker Yuri, I like a bit matured Yuri. i love Wolfram, he's my fave character.. But he gets more and more unlikable as the story progress. Well, im going to read more. I still find the plot interesting.

Is there any other ways or places I could read this fic that'll come WITH the deleted R-17 scenes, aside from your Adultfanfiction page? Urggh, the internet connection I'm using blocks porno sites, and surprisingly, yes, Adultfanfic is flagged as porno-contained webpage, by this internet connection I'm using right now.. And your MediaMiner org page doesn't seem to exist any more? (o.0)?

*sighs*Ah, this sucks, I'm only about 3 chapters away in finishing this awesome EPIC KKM! fic of yours here, and this whole situation is just pissin' me off, MAJESTICALLY. And, no, I'm so NOT sorry that this is not a review, but a pathetic excuse for an SOS to the author instead.

Loved the story! Couldn't stand some of the sad parts, but loved all of the last few chapters (even if I couldn't see the scenes I really wanted too)...shame. Still can't wait for more

Racist

I love this story.
It was awsome!

This was a masterpiece and I love how adult the two characters sound. True, I haven't read the manga and trying to find English copies of the light novels is about as easy as pulling someone's teeth. That aside, the fact that English isn't your first language is impressive. I teach English to learners who are learning it as a second language and I know how difficult this language can be to grasp. And as you've stated before, there are far too many people on this site who speak English as their primary language and do a piss-poor job of it on here. I applaud you.

Now, on to the story. I love it. I decided to read it (on both sites) instead of doing my homework immediately. I will do my homework now, but wanted to drop a line and let you know how wonderful this story was. I can't wait to read the next one since Wolfram is such a great character. I can see this type of situation happening in canon and I am glad a more realistic set of reactions finally came to play. I know that us anime fans love the ridiculous, but at times it's nice to see something realistic come to pass. I know for a fact that many people in Japanese culture love BL/GL, but only in fiction; they don't like to talk about it happening in real life.

Thank you for the entertainment.

HAHAHAHA the shrine has become a sluthouse? That's priceless! Still a great story, though I feel bad for Wolfram right now. I also feel bad for Yuuri, it's like no one gets that he's just not attracted to men! (Even in the anime/manga!)

But I would like for Yuuri to turn around and fall for Wolfy!

I really like this story so far! And you're right, I've seen some native English speakers who don't seem able to grasp such simple concepts. It infuriates me when people screw up the simplest things. It's "I KNOW", not "I no". And Where vs were. I told my cousin that if she wanted to talk to me she wasn't allowed to text me anymore, she had to call. I mean seriously, one can only take so many rounds of "Were r u?" and "i no, hay" before they want to break their phone.

Ok, back to the story. I guess I sorta understand your not liking Greta, though I personally 'squee*' whenever I see something small and cute, and she was no exception. I don't really like women in the shows I watch, which is why KKM is so perfect for me (and shows like Supernatural). I'm not really threatened by the older women (Like Lady Celi), it's only the ones who could mess up any crack pairings that are in my head I don't seem to like.

Once again, I really lie your story so far, and I can't wait to see how it turns out. You've written the characters well, and your mastery of the English language is top rate! Hats off to you, my friend!

*Squee - verb: To squeal with glee; from a combination of the two words; the sound of an excited fangirl
noun: A feeling of excitement and happiness, such that one feels like squeeing