God, this chapter was so refreshing! I find so often that it's shown that Kagome is the most attractive thing, so curvy but also well toned. And while she's done a lot of cardio, she hasn't been properly trained. Your description made her sound so much more realistic and human, I loved it!
Also, I'm always a sucker for Kagome being a mom figure to the kids, it warms my heart. Great writing, I'm excited to read the rest of it!

I love how Sesshomaru socialized with Kagome's family, and now he show the other hidden personality
Imagine when the two became a couple, and how SWEET AND ROMANTIC they will act to each other

Awe I must have missed the part where kagome and sesshy made the coupling scene and I waited and waited and it never came up how sad. Good story though

ugh...the oc plague strikes again.

This is a great story. I was so sad when Kai died. I was sad that Miroku didn’t make it but I think he is probably happy being reunited with Kai and his 2nd wife. I’m happy that Kagome & Sesshomaru made it to the future to reunite with her family. Thank you for this wonderful story

I really enjoyed this story!

And for killing Kai you. Suck! I'm kidding.

The premise was indeed interesting. However this story should be revised. Getting someone to beta read it would be nice.

Too many simple grammar mistakes (your vs you’re is the most common one) kept me from continue reading.

wait... what?

Kai is a dog, miko, AND fox demon?

Dog ears, fox tail, and miko powers.

Wtf...

I love it keep up the amazing work

Nice

I enjoyed this story, the ending was perfect, for a while I was thinking just how many pups kagome had for they to scattered all around the world.. it must be quite a lot :v oh well I like this story! thank you for writing it :3

just throw inuyasha away to pond. he deserve it

I loved this story up until the OC was introduced. She was very... Mary Sue-ish in my opinion, no offense. I don't really see why she had to be added to the story and really it seemed like she was only added in to be a super powerful character that everyone loves, and somehow the only person who could train Kagome... honestly, I loved this story right up until she was added but after a few chapters with her I had to stop reading. You're a talented writer, and I adored the rest of the story, however!

Yaaaayyyyyyyy