| Reviews for To Stumble |
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cmend3z0221 chapter 2 . 6/13/2017 Troy and Ryan work out their problems and be together forever? Troy promise Ryan he will his forever? |
Melbi chapter 2 . 2/18/2013 So sweet! :D |
x.keepingthemoon.x chapter 2 . 2/9/2013 this is so good! very cute :) |
xBroken-Glassx chapter 2 . 6/12/2011 I really like how you handled the Roger situation. As much as I wanted to Troy and Ryan to get back together, I didn't want Roger to be a jerk to persuade Ryan to go back to Troy. Having him already know and be super supportive was definitely the way to go. Nice job on that. In case your question still stands down on the bottom, I have to say I kind of liked the original a little better than the sequel. Don't get me wrong, the sequel was good and I'd be willing to read more if you chose to write another one, but I liked the original a bit better. Either way, they're excellent pieces of literary work. I hope someday I can write at least half as good as you do. |
HaruHaruGD chapter 2 . 5/22/2011 Wah! This was great! I like this one and the original. They are both very awesome, and you are very wonderful! I seriously thought Troy was dead when Ryan went to his house on prom nght. :'D I don't know why, just the way Troy's mom reacted I guess haha. |
chocolatelover1 chapter 2 . 10/9/2010 Yeah go for the trilogy! lol Just not to sad... I felt like I wanted to cry!... |
Dugleik chapter 2 . 7/4/2010 A brilliant sequel, with an awesome character Troy. |
loosedefense chapter 2 . 6/26/2010 You don't write. You create art. This story and it's prequel was sheer poetry from the first sentence to the last. You asked us to pick your favorite, and even though the first one is more popular, this story has a heart-wrenching aura of sadness that surrounds it that cannot be matched. You. Are. Amazing. |
Madame-DiscoBloodbath chapter 2 . 4/30/2010 that was awsome i was entraced i didnt realize how much time passed |
excentrykemuse chapter 2 . 4/4/2010 wow. the angst. thank goodness there's a HAPPY ending otherwise you would have had me possibly crying on easter! cheers, cen |
excentrykemuse chapter 1 . 4/4/2010 so enjoying! cheers, cen |
cuiper90 chapter 2 . 11/14/2009 loved it |
Renn chapter 2 . 8/14/2009 mh, the first being a the original, and this the sequel, I can't really consider one better than another, they're both a needed part of the story. And both very well written, at that! |
Alex chapter 2 . 4/11/2009 Wow, that was fantastic and brought tears to my eyes. I also read the Disembark. They were both great and passionate. I never really cared for the movies but given them a whole new prespective. I also don't really like reading, but if you were to write a novel something similar to this, I would most definately buy it in a heart beat. |
laika chapter 2 . 3/27/2009 Okay, let me tell you something first. I'm so FED UP with bad descriptions of love and relationships. You know, those shallow and UGH horrible things. But this? Utter GENIUS. I mean... I think you pictured love perfectly. You could just FEEL the love in some parts. I loved these both, the original and the sequel. You write gorgeously, I think you just restored my fate in fanfiction. Damn, I can't even express how much I loved these fics... gosh. xD You have skill, wow. This is a really late comment, I tend to find the best stories REALLY late! xD |