I LOVE IT, I LOVE HARU/KYO (UKE KYO POWER)

But now I really want to know what you had planned to be Haru's second curse.

Oh well, this was very good, especially compared to most Fruits Basket fan fiction (there are sadly not a lot of good writers in the Fruba community).

WHY!?

love it ! next chapter i will read tomorrow after i wake up night now!

I loved your story, from beginning to end. From every paragraph to each chapter. I read this when I couldn't sleep... and I found myself glad I couldn't sleep, because I needed to know how it ended. You truly brought me happiness. _

Even before i finished the third paragraph I just had to write a review. This has to be my third time reading it and I love it right from the start every time :) Please keep writing more HaruxKyo stories cuz you are just TOO good at this :D I love your style of writing and I'm looking forward to reading more x3!

i loved this story very,very much. The plot you had going was brilliant, and could have made an amazing story, but well things happen. I really hope that you make a sequel for this.

:-] A good read!

I am sad you are ending this, but I can understand why... I don't really like the 'resolution' this anime is headed towards either... This was an amazing fic. I liked it alot.

ah. pity...

I could tell (when I first began reading) that this was a plot building on substance. good thick real plot.

but the chapters at the end, did have the hint that you were just building up towards an ending. - sighs -

I understand how it goes, being one of those authors myself, where the flame for the fandom just sorta goes away and life gets' busier. aka college or university x_x

just a pity yeah, coz it would've been bloody awesome if you had enough steam to push this train through all the bits you had envisioned in the beginning (haru's second curse! akito! and the whole locked-up after-graduation thing which i was looking forward to...)

nonetheless, I think it's been a great story to read. love the way haru and kyo interacted. loved it :)

and thank you for writing this, you may feel the quality isn't up to par or something, but i think it's great. literary wise, great. and content too.

well~ it's been a good time. thank you again for the wonderful read :)

sometimes, this story is so good, other times, it just makes no sense. bi-polar or not, this is so out of character for haru, it's frustrating to read sometimes. im not sure what to think so far. im not insulting you, or saying the story is bad, but it bounces around so randomly at times and is so irrational - and not in the humans are irrational way - that i get confused and frustrated. the plot is brilliant, but the interaction between kyou and haru is.. bizarre and inconsistent. and white and black haru are almost.. i can rarely tell which is which - not saying there should be a stark contrast, but... white haru is typically kind and thoughtful or absentminded and generally caring. black haru is aggressive and vulgar, but it feels like... haru is just a psychopath pretending to be a good person sometimes. it's not lack of maturity, it's just... inconsistent personality you've given him. kyou's a weeny bit ooc, but overall, he's done rather well. but it seems haru is a struggle. im going to finish reading the story, because despite my crit i really do like it and am interested in seeing where it goes and how things work out.

i dont want to discourage, because you have heaps of talent and im enjoying the parts which aren't inconsistent or irrational and confusing. so, please never stop writing, and take my crit with a grain of salt, because im no pro. im just a reader trying to give some insight into how im feeling the story. feel free to take more heart from those that praise, because they arent wrong. it's a fab story, it's just your haru is confusing the ever loving **** out of me - and again, not because he's haru or bi-polar or confusing in general, but because he's written as if he's 5 different characters at any given time. [he feels more like sasuke from naruto half the time.]

anyway, keep writing and never be discouraged no matter what i or anyone says.

angst fluff - comin' up! Oh, a hurt/sick kyou is a guilty pleasure of mine. Something so irresistible about it I'm sure Haru feels the same way :)

Your story was so cute! I'm glad you finished off their relationship even if all the plot points were not quite tied in a neat little package.

I wanted to wait til the end before I said something. And.. I can't even put into words how amazing and well detailed this is. Haru/Kyo are me OTP, and you just made me love them more.

I laughed, I loved, almost cried. This has everything that you could ever want in a FanFic. I'm glad you wrote this.

I remember reading this long ago and while looking over my favs I found it. Now, I loved this story and felt a little sad at the ending, (When I first read it and the second time) but I want you to look back and think why you loved them. You don't have to if you don't want to, I mean I faded away from this couple too. Sometimes though, you gotta think. Hell, I even miss loving some couples. But we all leave things in the past.