This story will always shake me to the core.

Chilled me to the bone and saddened my heart. Wonderful.

Goddamn what a perfect story! Even more so for October!

This will haunt my nightmares but in the best of ways!

This is just a fantastic deconstruction of the revival story. I've read and reread this a lot over the years, and it gives me chills every time. Very well-written, and a great balance of fluff and tragedy.

Seriously if it was your intent to make me cry it worked. It was very well written, but very sad.

Chilling, haunting, realistic. Probably my favorite clerith story I've ever read.

disturbingly beautiful. just that.

Wow, I'm speechless. It's a bit too dark for my tastes, but great job on this one.

I don't know what the fu:ck to say.

This is heartbreaking, disturbingly haunting and absolutely stunning.

I'm angry that you gave me false hope, how they seemed almost perfect, a newlywed couple thinking up names for their baby, discovering that a future is possible for them. I've never seen Aerith's revival carried out like this, at least not in such a bitter, dauntingly disturbing way, yet there's eloquence in it.

And god the way you end it, that glimmer of hope was just snuffed out there and then by Cloud. I never thought he'd do it, and despite the fact that I couldn't comprehend what had happened, it felt right. It needed to be done.

You're the reason why I fell in love with this pairing and it took me forever to find this again, but I'm so glad that I did. This is truly a masterpiece.

One word: breathtaking.

AHH!

YOU FUCKIN TWISTED SON OF A BITCH!

THEY WERE SUPOSSED TO LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER!

I HATE YOU!

I HATE YOU!

great ending tho.

Wow.

I thought time would pass in such a way that he'd die the same day he killed her.

Never imained if she got revived, she'd be so sick with rotten innards but wow it works.

Great story

Enchanting...a dark, disturbing tale of twisted love. I found this story to be a very good read. A saw a few flaws here and there, but nothing major. You might want to take everything out fo the presen tense though. It makes reading this a tad bit confusing. Still, a great read.

.GOD.

That was heartwrenchingly beautiful, and hauntingly disturbing. There was something indefinitely immortal in this story, although there was a very dark underlining laced within the words that you've written. However, I loved your story, I feel like crying when I read it. Although this Aerith featured in your story was so different from how I know her to be, but there are still remnants of her, especially her happiness, her kindness and her smile. I love your writing. Thank you for writing such a touching story.