This was a superb story. My only nitpick is in the movie Lux had to take a taxi back to her house after waking up on the football field after prom night. I assume there must be a good amount of distance between her house and the school. So there probably wouldn't be enough time for Lux to be able to sprint to her school, schtup Trip and then run all the way back home to kill herself all in one night.

This was wonderful! I was so angry at what Trip did to Lux and I sort of blamed him for playing a big part in what lead to thier deaths, so I'm kind of using this story asmy angsty revenge story. You managed to make it strong, sad and full of passion.

My only complaint was that people suffocate themselves with the gas of the oven, not burn thier heads, but someone already mentioned that. No biggie! In this day and age of electric stoves and ovens, I think the concept of gas stove suicides is a bit old school!

WELL DONE!

Great fic. My one tiny complaint is that people commiting suicide by putting their head in the oven don't actually light it first. They take the much less painful route of turning the gas on and dieing of carbon monoide poisoning.

This is an idea. the trip/lux love/lust did go largely without any kind of clousure.

Very nice.

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That was great, the only part that bothered me was the dialouge which seemed a little fake.

But great work, I don't read alot of good VS fics.

ohh, very angsty. Great job!