| Reviews for Underneath |
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Fallenranger chapter 8 . 8/31 AUG cliff hangers |
KatoGS123 chapter 8 . 12/9/2018 Mesa thinks thisa story isa dead dead Dead, this story is. No longer writing, the author is. Beep bo beep beep roaaaaiiiiioh |
Storm0719 chapter 8 . 6/1/2018 amigo lastimas esta historia tiene potencial lastima que no siguieron escribiendo, amigo actualizarla por favor |
clover-blossom chapter 8 . 4/11/2018 Well, that's quite the cliffhanger. And it's been dangling out there for over a decade now. Boo! Even though this is unfinished, I wanted to take the time to comment on how much I like what you have written here. Specifically, I love the insight into Anakin gleaned via Obi-Wan- the way Obi-Wan is made aware of the strong, raw power of the Force that Anakin posses- and how different it is from how he himself experiences it; the feelings and emotions evoked from Anakin's memories; the Council's treatment of Anakin and how Palpatine had charmed Anakin. These things, combined with Obi-Wan's knowledge of the future work together to make this story compelling. Plus, the light moments of humor are well done and not at all out of place. |
Tsuki chapter 8 . 12/1/2017 Are you ever going to continue this story? ( It's do good! People are still reading your works |
lunarchroniclesandcockatiels chapter 8 . 6/9/2016 Nooooooo |
lunarchroniclesandcockatiels chapter 7 . 6/9/2016 Ahhhhhhhhhhj! |
lunarchroniclesandcockatiels chapter 6 . 6/9/2016 Ooooooo... |
lunarchroniclesandcockatiels chapter 5 . 6/9/2016 Now if Anakin switched with a gungan... That would be gret |
lunarchroniclesandcockatiels chapter 4 . 6/9/2016 Wow.. Just wow... |
lunarchroniclesandcockatiels chapter 3 . 6/9/2016 Lol great |
lunarchroniclesandcockatiels chapter 2 . 6/9/2016 Best. Fabric. Ever. This is so good! |
lunarchroniclesandcockatiels chapter 1 . 6/9/2016 Ahhh! Obi-wan |
CatBludger3903 chapter 8 . 4/18/2016 Please continue! We all hate cliffhangers :( |
WinchesterNimrod chapter 1 . 7/22/2015 if i woke up in that position i think i would have screamed my ruddy head off. Hopefully Obi-Wan is more...composed. |