Haha... the slight teasing before she said "I do..."

amazing fanfiction i just love it, you are grea!:) thanks

I kinda thought Neji was dead for a while...

You managed to blend in the sadness and the happiness of it all, it was freaking beautiful.

this was really sweet! you've done a great job of blurring the lines between happiness and sadness, laughter and tears, the good and the bad and the ugly...me like :)

Beautiful piece. I'm glad it had a happy ending; I'll admit, you got me at the end. I really did think it was a funeral. The ending was incredibly sweet too. I loved it.

it took me a while to figure out that he wasn't dead in the last chapter. really good story. all the chapters were absolutely awesome. :)

That was beautiful! Please keep writing :D

this chapter was kind of bitter sweet...it seemed as if the pains were slowly ending from this point and this marriage was the key to ending their sorrows. Neji would be committed more to tenten now and tenten would be with her love. And the ending, where tenten cried, was the point in realization that it was finished, that they were finally going to be free and together. Beautiful. Heartwarming. Moving. AWESOME CHAPTER! ~yeji301

the interactions between neji and tenten were so sweet, especially when neji came to her first, instead of the hospital. That just screams out that neji utterly and undeniably loves tenten. AWESOME CHAPTER! ~yeji301

i think that this was a very moving and important chapter about the development in tenten and her depression and whatnot. She's sad and depressed and dull because neji's not with her... then, she meets lee and he tells her that it's okay to cry...and in the end, she does. She learns to accept weakness and i think that, that was very beautiful.

AWESOME CHAPTER! ~yeji301

This first chapter was so sad. Tenten and neji deserve their happiness and i hate how the hyuuga clan treats neji-and how it affects both of them. Neji has to suffer being away from the one he loves and is torn between is loyalness for his clan and his love...so he tries to be there for both. And tenten...she is struggling to cope with the hardships of being alone and away from the person she loves. this fanfiction is amazing! ~yeji301

Dammit, I thought he was dead!

Nice spin, but really you almost had me crying, and you almost had me headdesking...

Bleh!

Aw, such a cute NejiTen story. I liked how the ending could have gone either way. It was very vague. It has my full approval.

Sorry, I've been so lazy, which is uncharacteristic of me. Usually I spend all my energy on fanfiction, and am lazy about everything else. However, although this is my only review, I have read almost all of your stories. You really have a gift for writing.

~Uchiha, Nami

Woah, that's really good. Its so sad but its really good still. lol i keep on saying really good.

GREAT! Awsome story!