| Reviews for To Be A Friend |
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Lauren-Gabriella.X chapter 22 . 12/14/2007 taylor kissed gabriells's forehead? |
Dr. Austin A. Winchester chapter 17 . 10/26/2007 watch the ego chad. its way to big already! cool chapter. |
Dr. Austin A. Winchester chapter 14 . 10/26/2007 this is story is really good so far. |
Dr. Austin A. Winchester chapter 11 . 10/26/2007 okay, listen. im not trying to be mean or anything, because your stories are really good. What I've noticed is that your very lazy with your writing at times. Meaning, that a lot of the time you just go like 'She got everything she needed to make dinner. Then she went home.' that's lazy. I'm not trying to say that im like a pro at writing, im not, im just telling you what you could do to improve on your writing, which is pretty good! One thing to do, would be to make your sentences longer, and a lot more detail, other than that its pretty good. Once agian, I'm not trying to hurt your feelings, I'm just trying to help you improve. Please don't hate me! |
bleyman chapter 1 . 9/8/2007 Cool! |
shannon004 chapter 34 . 5/13/2007 AW! i L0VED it! esp. the ending! |
Troy Is My Boy chapter 1 . 12/31/2006 OMG! I love this story! Please update 'Can College Cause Conflicts!' TOTAL TROYELLA! I wish I was Troy's girlfriend, don't we all? |
Dryan89 chapter 1 . 12/1/2006 I love it! Great Job! |
TheFabMax chapter 34 . 11/22/2006 yay! happy ending! ive have FINALLY read one of your stories! i mean, youre all reviewing, saying how you loved my stories, but i havent read one of yours! so i decided to get my butt in gear, and read. and you know what i find? THAT YOUR STORY WAS FABULOUS! yeah. lol. im off to read the sequel! Tootles! TheFabMax |
namkrowa91 chapter 35 . 11/6/2006 Awesome story, awesome ending. I love it. I'll be on the lookout for the new story. ) |
NicHuete chapter 35 . 11/5/2006 Aww thank you for including me! i really loved it! i'm waiting for the sequel! |
GoodCharlotte615 chapter 1 . 11/3/2006 I havent read all of this chapter... but i like it so far... and i will put you and the story on my favorite list because it is great so far... AMBER |
ChaylorTwilightQueen10 chapter 35 . 11/3/2006 OMG! U are so welcome, gurl! this story was the bomb. it's on my favs on this site and on my computer. i LOVED IT! can't wait for the sequel! |
RPM Shadow chapter 34 . 11/2/2006 I loved it! |
Listen.To.Your.Heartx3 chapter 34 . 11/2/2006 aw sweet! Can't wait for the sequel! |