| Reviews for Be Mine |
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Ms. Fairweather chapter 13 . 5/16 I never tire of this story. it's great every time I read it. |
The Rising Phoenix chapter 13 . 4/19 THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD STORY! GREAT JOB! ~TRP~ |
The Rising Phoenix chapter 12 . 4/19 Great chapter! ~TRP~ |
The Rising Phoenix chapter 11 . 4/19 SO GLAD I BINGED THIS TONIGHT! ~TRP~ |
The Rising Phoenix chapter 10 . 4/19 YAYYY! Lita, oh my...LOL YES! YES YES YES! ~TRP~ |
The Rising Phoenix chapter 9 . 4/19 NICE! (Too engrossed this time to properly live comment, so I'm towards the end). YAYYYYY! |
The Rising Phoenix chapter 8 . 4/19 Alfo from Ch. 7 I forgot to add - Awww Teddy! YAYY! Ch 8 - I was right on my 2nd guess! GO Mr. Dawson! But awww...:( Awwww Lita...Oh Lita...No...Yet I expect nothing less.. WHAT!? NO WAY! HOLY... JUST NO!...*Is Clearly shocked* My guess is Mr. W got Mina's parents sucked into this, and/or Rei's father... ~TRP~ *Rushes to read the next chapter* |
The Rising Phoenix chapter 7 . 4/19 (From the previous chapter: Awww Poor Mina! Glad she's okay1) This chpater: Woah! This chapter is awesome! I love Lia, I really, really do...:) Go Serena! You tell him! Oh WOW Lita...I think ni this case (20 mils in half an hour?!), you'd beat Amara...) LIta, the OWNER of the building? Dang girl!...(But you lost points because you stuck your tongue out at him..) Okay, so I think my original unaired theory is wrong, and the guy Lita met in the lobby (the building owner) is Mr. W, and he somehow managed to maybe take an express elevator to beat Lita to Mr. Dawson. (She also went to another floor first I think, because she hit a button quickly to close th door on the building owner). Keep up the great work! ~TRP~ |
The Rising Phoenix chapter 6 . 4/19 I have a theory who Mr. W. is...But let us see...*Continues to read...* ~TRP~ |
The Rising Phoenix chapter 5 . 4/19 Another cute chapter! I like how you're digging deep into both the senshi and the 'dogs' personalities. ~TRP~ |
The Rising Phoenix chapter 4 . 4/19 OMG JB, your poor name... And awwww poor Artemis! (I'll take him!) :) Oh my goodness Mina...*shakes head*... Aww Ami & Hermes! I love it! Great job! ~TRP~ |
The Rising Phoenix chapter 3 . 4/19 OMG I loved this chapter. Period. So sweet! Love Teddy & Mako. Oh Rei and Daisy...Can't wait for more hijinks! ~TRP~ |
The Rising Phoenix chapter 2 . 4/19 I loved the first chapter! Very interesting premise. I found this story through a recommendation from two of your readers... For this chapter, I'd LOVE to see about the night they all wound upon jail thanks to Mina... Wait no Luna or Artemis? I would have thought Serena would have replied back that she didn't get a dog with "I have Luna. Yes, she's a cat, but she's still a pet, (no offense to her). Ah, there they are. So who's watching the cats? Serena's parents? Ohhh, please write that backstory too of Serena trying to sneak in the cats *and* bunnies! Very cute chapter! I love the friendly banter and the still newlywed stage is sweet too! Keep up the great work! ~TRP~ |
Guest chapter 13 . 10/24/2019 This one is sooo nice~~~ I hope you make the sequel for this one. Really want to see more romance between Mina and Kael! |
Linariel chapter 13 . 2/19/2019 Loved this story. What started as almost a romantic comedy turned into an intriguing chapter plausible plot with a statisfying mystery. Gah why are there only so many fantastic story on Senshi and Generals getting together. In some way this was my canon it was great. I love how you portrayed all the girls they weren't just damsels in distress and held there own perfectly. I love everything had links and connected the entire group together so effortlessly. I personally had fun reading each girl with their respective beaus includin Serena and Darien in the mix. I think you gave them all a great amount of screen time and really complimented each of the guardians with the respective generals. I think all of them were equally great. Especially Mina and Kunzite/Kael ha ha their interactions were a lot t fun. This story wasn't too long or short it had just the right amount and the ending was fantastic. Awww who would think of the girls adopting dogs that were actually the reincarnated generals genius. I truly loved this definitely a favorite Sailor Moon fic for me thanks ever so much for writing it! |