Really nice story. It's pretty inspiring, in a way. Congratz~ :)

Amazing! Your way of describing this scene is so intense and they way you ended it was masterful! Great job!

It was the best moment in Tsubasa anime...So sad and so great. And now reading you story I felt it again even harder. That was really good!

God I want the third season!

so nicely written!

I really like how you put the reader in Kuroganes shoes. It makes it really interesting to read. I also like how poetic it is, but you can still see someone just screaming this inside their head. It's really good! I really enjoyed reading it.

Hot damn that was good. I've never seen a fanfic with such an accurate portrayal of Kurogane's inner self, all honesty no joke. Damn. That was awesome, and I wanna read it again.

I would love to see more of your work. :) I would love to see your take on Kuro-puu's side of things with all the 130 chapters. Especially the Celes and Nihon arc. M~

Off to ransack your other fics now. Muha.

Great insite into Kurogane's mind, ne? Loved the 'sorry' part in the first chapter.

Oh it has such a nice 'voices in kuro-rin's head' ring to it. This, while most certainly a very disturbed and rather gory fic, has got to be the best description of one of my favorite parts of a manga ever.

KuroFay forever! :P Or I suppose it could be anyway...

I absolutely adore the sort of detached way the narration goes-not quite directly Kurogane's point of view, and at the same time, not another person entirely, either. Lovely, overall :D And you have better English than many people I know who speak it as their first language :S

Ngah.

[dies]

This was intense and incredible and your Kurogane is absolutely perfect. And now I wish I could read French so I could read your other stuff. Damn.

Beuh... pas drole... pourquoi tu le vois si pessimistement? *sait que c'est pas francais et c'est pas grave* On peut le voir d'une facon plus joyeuse! Fye est vivant! Ouais! *baisse les bras* ouais bon, je me tais, c'est vrai que c'est pas joyeux. surtout maintenant T_T

Pourquoi t'as dis que t'aimais pas autant le 2eme chapitre?

*sniffle* I really, really liked this chapter. It was wonderfully written.

Aw. Sadness. I liked it though. -

WOW. Just...wow. This is going on my favorites.

I was excited when I saw a chapter two - a chapter two? YESS! - and I was not disappointed. . Despite, oui, a lot of italics - some I didn't like, mais autres je crois qu'ils sont parfait - it was great! I loved how you could just feel Kurogane's mind racing as he thought about the choice that he had literally two seconds to make. C'est magnifique, et je suis très contente que tu as décidé (décidais?) écrire plus.

Also, I'm sorry if my French is bad. ; I tried, anyway. ._.

I KNEW I had seen your name before! I can't believe its off a story I've read too! (and I can't believe i hadn't reviewed it either. ~_~ Forgive me.

I loved it, KuroFai is the best, and I really like how you did Kuro. Worked in so well.

~LDR~