Update please

ugh i love this scenario. everything is so good. especially this chapter, makes me want more...

I do wish that Jackie caught Kelso in the show. Because he kept hurting her over and over and she deserved better than that. And if she was with Hyde sooner, maybe their relationship would’ve been stronger. Overall, great story!

Love this whole idea and hope you come back and do more with this one. Read ya Later ;)

Great story. I hope you finish it one day.

I love all the thoughts running through Jackie's mind. They feel so genuine.

loved it!

One of the best JH stories I've read so far!

Please update soon?!

sooo good, i know youve probs abandoned it but please if theres anymore i need it! one of the bests

Wow. Amazing

I hope you continue this!

Is this story complete? Cause really I thought there is more drama/angst coming with Kelso finding out about the affair...

If it is kinda done or whatever that's fine since I think it could be in a way.

For the chapter itself I'm surprised you called it first real smut piece you've written considering how well done it was. I'm kinda jealous since my attempts have not come out half as good.

Well she is somewhat insecure if you remember the episode Hyde called Brooke hot, she was defiantly pretty insecure there. But I do kinda think she is most of the time, but she has that sort of brave face act like she's suppose to be confident even when she might not feel that way.

All of her sweet kisses and heart fluttering sighs were just tools for her own healing. She never intended to share the happiness she could give with him. She was a user just like everyone else.

Aww, poor, distrustful Hyde!

"You really like her, don't you?"

Hyde closed his eyes at her words. He really didn't want to have this conversation, not now, not ever.

"No I don't."

"Then why are you getting so worked up about her taking Kelso back?"

Exactly.

You wouldn't risk your friendship with Kelso over some girl you were just messing around with.

Exactly again.

In this box is everything you ever gave me, down to the plastic dinosaurs and rubber chicken.

So the "Goodbye" of the chapter title is Jackie's goodbye to Kelso. Clever! :)

Maybe it took someone he cared about to see clearly too.

Nice ending to the chapter!