Nice, clean and sweet Truten fic. Enjoyable buildup to the events in Ch. 2. The characters are voiced very well.

Omg. Tht was one hell of a story. Your writing is one of the best and most mature writing I have ever read :) love the story, and I don't usually read gay smut. Lol

T_T *sniff* My poor, poor heart. That was a dream to read, absolutely joyful and the best DBZ Goten and Trunks story I have read. I would have loved... no adored this to have been longer, to be full monstrous story, but at the very least I can be content that at least one of your stories has a conclusion.

You're, or were in light of your comment about how long you've been away from , a fantastic writer and if you truly think your ability has improved enough that you can make this better, well I honestly cannot wait to read it. _

ff, this was just too hot! i adored every single word in this fanfiction, godDAYUM
it was super sexy and really sweet at the same time; you write really well! i liked everything about it!

Gah! Oh, man this was so great! The first chapter was so hilarious with Bulma and Vegeta mentally scarring Trunks and Trunks attempting to get even with Vegeta's credit cards. The second chapter was just...wow. I needed a moment from it all. It was great. Wonderful job.

I hate to point out that there were various grammar errors but nothing I could not endure. I totally wa sinto this from the start, the plotline is so perfectly planned and it was inexpicably lemony! Great job!

best fanfic ive ever read this was amazing!

Woah... that was sexy and well written!

Idk how you managed to write a whole chapter of full sexy times and lemon without makng it look as too much. I reall like your way of writting because you're never out of character. Anyway, write something more soon?

Aw, really good, lots of detail, this is amazing. I hope you make more fics like this

Wow, this story was really good. I loved basically every little bit of it. There were a couple cliches with the "I've been waiting for you to say that forever" bit. I was like "oh sigh, another one like that?" But that was the only part that kind of made me deflate. I loved the parts where Trunks was getting pissed at Vegeta and Bulma and the part where Goten was trying to tell himself that he was only jerking off to get rid of his hard-on. Hilarious.

Also, this story kind of helped me out a bit because I'm about to start my own Trunks/Goten story and I haven't watched DBZ in so long ((just started playing the game again yesterday)) I kind of lost touch with their personalities.

Well anything, this was basically perfect and the lemon was nice and huge and delicious. A whole chapter long! Dirty minds like yours are wonderful lolz.

Great story. It's headed straight to the favs. Oh and what does the title mean?

T.T ...cute... T.T

This is so cute and funny!

But then turns out to be sad (

Well, the point is that i liked it ) and i'm gonna read the other part now :P

Wow my first real Trunks and Goten story _ I loved it! The ending was very sweet, I can just imagine Vegeta and Bulma when they get the bill though, lol.

Nice! I loved it! Very good disciption of the sex scene! Not to mention it was so long, it was amazing! Keep upthe good work and please write more!

EPILOGUE!