| Reviews for His Bright Side, Her Silver Lining |
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   Amon Kashino chapter 2 . 12/6/2016 Nope why the sudden jump at the end of the chapter when everything was going so well |
| ShinigamiNoKitsune209 chapter 2 . 10/25/2016 Cute. Seriously. |
| daniel 29 chapter 2 . 11/11/2011 You have to admit that the question of how good a hokage or a kage level naruto could become is a genuine mystery |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/1/2011 its good. but i would of had a warm felling is you left it off with just a kiiss on the cheeks. plus no flames intended thogh u hinted at love u said nothing to hint at romantic love with how people there age seem to view one another it could of been surrogate brothersister. especially since u made naruto say he was an orphan and hanabi has no brother |
| Unholy Deciple chapter 2 . 5/27/2010 add a scene about their first date and the wedding otherwise it was a great fic |
| unseen constant chapter 2 . 2/3/2010 this story is so sweet that it makes my teeth hurt a little. Still I enjoyied the story realy good job. |
| someone179 chapter 2 . 10/18/2009 nice :) |
| EfficientLazyness chapter 2 . 8/2/2009 Really cute story. But you could have added at least another chapter. The time skip was just to sudden. At least you could have added another sequence about 5 years in the future, on their first date or something. Well anyway nice work, as I said really cute |
| Weaver of worlds chapter 1 . 10/28/2008 Interesting concept? Check. Clear English? Check [thank you]. In character? Double check [thank god]. Overall, a nice read. I would like point out one teansy little gramatical thing that I noticed, which if you fix, will strengthen your writing. Within one paragraph you have Hanabi speaking then Naruto acting (and speaking as well in some cases) and vice versa. This is a 'no-no'. Gets confusing and such. One paragraph one person speaking/acting. Thats it. _ Cheers! |
| kellyshl chapter 2 . 7/4/2008 haha! nice! eh... Owari... seems familar to me XD |
| kellyshl chapter 1 . 7/4/2008 -searching for author lackofname- AH I HAVEN READ THE EP02 ! -_- see la... u distracted me -_- |
| the grey mage chapter 2 . 5/7/2008 i have not read the older version, which i think you should have kept up so people(me) can compare. i liked both chapters except that epilogue for this one. bah. |
| the grey mage chapter 1 . 5/7/2008 read. |
| My Solitude chapter 2 . 5/3/2008 This is pretty good. I'm pretty okay with this pairing also. It still does feel kind of weird for a Naruto/Hanabi pairing though, seeing the age difference and that Hinata has a crush on Naruto. But all in all, I enjoyed reading this. |
| ApexPredator chapter 3 . 5/3/2008 I like the rewritten one better :) |
