SMEXY

Really enjoy how you balance humor and raciness with their deep emotional connection and overall compatibility. It comes off sweet, not smutty. This kept me grinning. :)

The text is easy to read, dialogue very natural. I only stumbled during their "fall" (oh my, I'm unintentionally punny!). I had to really slow down and work to picture their positions in my head and I'm not sure I got it right.

Anyway, I was thoroughly entertained. Thanks.

This was a really well written fic. I would have liked to read more, but nonetheless I really enjoyed it.

oh plz write more. i love this. i wanna see what happens later

hahaha. very cute. :]

wow., what a compromishing situation he is in now. ;]

Aw! That was really cute! You chould continue!

OMG LOL! XD

Oh, man. Good one, really. It's all the hormones talking, you two thick-headed people. This story is extremely entertaining, and your wonderful description adds more to that pleasant experience of a fabulous read. I love love love it!

Keep it up! You have a very good talent in writing.

Ah, this one is just AWESOME! and "Oh, that’s right, I forgot: We all know Ichigo has to use bankai just to be fast enough to play with the big boys"... I just couldn't stop laughing!

Haha, very funny story, you described each scene very well. Ichigo was adorable in this!

it was a nice fic

Hmm... Very well done - and yes I'm well aware of the fact that this is quite old.

HAHAHHAHAHA!

that was funny!

LOL, who would've thought a few "choice" pieces of clothing could cause so much trouble? Nice job.