Reviews for Mother Freedom, Carry Me Home
Teri chapter 19 . 5/1/2007
It was so wonderful seeing Lila again. I enjoyed this piece. The reunion with Ned, getting to know Brooke, and especially your take on Tracy and Lila. Very nice work!
coolkidluvTQ chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
Great story as always it was great. :)
tracyluver chapter 19 . 8/9/2006
There. Are. No. Words. that was just...phenomeonal! I am so excited that i finally got to read it since my computer has just been acting ridiculous but it did! It took me like four hours because of the computer difficulties but i read it and it was AWESOME! Sequel...
Ms. Quartermaine chapter 7 . 8/2/2006
Forgot to review this chapter before...

Still adoring Annabeth and Simon. And aww...Tracy Quartermaine didn't have any friends. Tracy Walker did.
Ms. Quartermaine chapter 12 . 8/2/2006
Using dialogue from an actual episode that aired the same time as this took place worked very well. (The Tracy/Edward bedside scene.)

Hating Edward for doing that. Not that I expected anything different.

And still hating Ned. He told Brook that Tracy was dead? Ouch.

Glad to see that Luke is being brought into the story. :)
Ms. Quartermaine chapter 11 . 8/2/2006
LOL about Alice about to go on and on in the beginning. It's something she would totally do.

And I loved SweetLila, playing the nice mommy. :)
Ms. Quartermaine chapter 10 . 8/2/2006
Aww. I loved this chapter. I had no idea that the girl was going to be Brook. Loved the comparison to Tracy. :)
Ms. Quartermaine chapter 9 . 8/2/2006
Ooh. Ned's not being very nice to his mother. Not that he has any reason to be, but still...LOL. That's not to say I think he's acting OOC. I just don't like him here. ;)

Something little, but I thought Tracy believing that Skye was Alan and Monica's daughter was a neat idea.
Ms. Quartermaine chapter 8 . 8/2/2006
Haven't reviewed the rest of this yet...

The "worthless, cheating slut" repetition at the beginning had me laughing out loud.

I loved the reunion with Alan. :)

And uh oh...Here comes Ned. :o
ILoveTracyQ chapter 19 . 7/31/2006
I read your story all in one day.

WOW.

You already know how I feel about the story(and Simon),but just wanted to say this was an awesome story and I loved,loved,loved it.

And I'll still take my own personal Simon,if you know of one,send him my way. :)
Ms. Quartermaine chapter 6 . 7/31/2006
That part where Tracy is on the verge of hysterics? With the whole "he's faking it, Daddy's faking it?" Powerful. Really powerful. I love that your stories always give me a visual of what's happening. Oh, and I love that Simon kept calling her "honey." It's sweet. :)

Hmm...Monica asked for Tracy's contact information? I'm probably overlooking it, but did Monica want to tell her about Edward, or was she just curious where her sister-in-law had been all those years?

Next time, Tracy changes her name, she should change her entire name, not just her last. ;) They found out who she was really quick, LOL.
Ms. Quartermaine chapter 5 . 7/31/2006
Oh, from the last chapter? I wanted to say I'm amused that Simon calls her "Boss Lady" and that Simon's been referred to as "Professor Answer Man." LOL.

I know this Jason isn't the same as Jason Morgan. But for some reason, the thought of Jason M. with a camera, snapping photos, cracks me up. LOL.

And uh oh...I of course, know what happens, as I decided to read first, review later, but if I hadn't, I'd still be going "uh oh..." Hope that makes sense.
Ms. Quartermaine chapter 4 . 7/31/2006
This part had me going aww...

"Simon knew this because Tracy had told him one night in her apartment two years ago, when she'd been up all night crying, hurting, wanting a drink so badly it made her crazy. Because Annabeth was out of town. Because she couldn't face it alone, and he was all she had. She'd told him how nervous she got, how much she hated it, the questions and the curiosity. She'd let him hold her because there had really been nothing she could do at the time to stop him."

I love that Annabeth and Simon know that something's up with Tracy even though she does her best to conceal it.
Ms. Quartermaine chapter 3 . 7/31/2006
I think you also posted this part before.

Still loved it.

I think Tracy needs to exercise on GH. All the characters do. Well, I seem to recall Sonny wearing a track suit once. (shudders) He's not what I had in mind, LOL.
Ms. Quartermaine chapter 2 . 7/31/2006
(remembers reading this part when you posted an excerpt from the story)

It's even better the second time. I like Simon a lot.

For some reason, this part made me laugh:

"Have you seen your shrink?"

"My shrink told me to tell you to leave me alone and forget I ever told you about the nightmares," she said in a bored tone as she reached for the mouse.
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