Reviews for Naruto: The Soaring Leaf
NarHina chapter 11 . 3/26/2017
The stories good, but seems that you are trying to get to much in for each chapter like several little battles were just in this one chapter.

Also I think flashback would be a better use for world building it's hard to get into because our knowledge of how everything got to this point is limited especially Naruto's change.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
Guest chapter 11 . 11/18/2015
You had a really good story going here. Too bad you abandoned it.
willam and jack and jake chapter 11 . 5/6/2012
nice can't wait to read more
willam and jack and jake chapter 10 . 5/6/2012
nice
willam and jack and jake chapter 9 . 5/6/2012
nice
willam and jack and jake chapter 7 . 5/6/2012
nice
willam and jack and jake chapter 6 . 5/6/2012
what is naruto i wonder?
willam and jack and jake chapter 5 . 5/6/2012
nice
willam and jack and jake chapter 4 . 5/6/2012
nice
willam and jack and jake chapter 3 . 5/6/2012
nice
K chapter 11 . 1/2/2012
I was enjoying this story too bad you never finished it. I hoe you do.
K chapter 11 . 12/24/2011
This is a really cool story. I would love to see your ending. I love it.

PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE THIS FIC.
Shizuka Taiyou chapter 6 . 11/16/2010
Total awsomeness.

C.D.
Shizuka Taiyou chapter 5 . 11/16/2010
Not bad. Not bad at all.

C.D.
Shizuka Taiyou chapter 4 . 11/16/2010
Slowly liking this fic.

C.D.
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