Oh my giddy aunt.

That was...I...Feel...I hate you. -.-

Usually, I really hate Oc's. For anything. I have literally never read a VergilxOc fic. I find them...distasteful.

But this...NEEDS TO KEEP GOING. OMG.

I fell in love with your character. I fell in love with Vergil falling in love. It was amazing. There was mystery, there was intriuge, and lots of vocab in there. Very Vergil. Very cool.

Please, write some more with Amaranth. Please. I will pay you...somehow...*cocks eyebrow.*

I LOVED IT! I LOVE Y- NO I DON'T! I hate you for making this too short!

TehOdd1 xoox

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

it's pleasant

i like like..

it was very good, Vergil is a Hottie huh?

Well, I liked the beginning and the middle, but the ending seemed a little weak. Other than that, I loved it. You are a very talented writer. I'm expecting more chapters from you!

~ Riya

I enjoyed this, again, I enjoy most everything so I don't know whether this is actually any help to you. (smiles)

Word of advice.

No no, it's a NICE word of advice.

Instead of writing out the alphabet when you want to show a scene break, why not just put down three dashes in the middle? It'd look neater, maybe?

Heh, you can ignore me if you want to. _;

Aw. That's so sweet! I'm shocked that no one has reviewed yet! I totally agree that Amaranth isn't a Mary-Sue. I don't really believe that any character can be...unless you are a newb at writing. o_o; But I'm not saying you are, you got skill here. _ I like it.

Instant fave.

~Devil's Surreal