| Reviews for Dear Diary |
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   hawksgirl2481 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008 luv it! |
| quibbler149 chapter 1 . 6/25/2007 Hey! This totally rocks! U hav no idea how hard it is 2 find a Danny/Evelyn fanfic! Write more of these if u can! Its deep and meaningful and just...beautiful! Ciao! quibbler149 |
| HayyBay chapter 1 . 12/3/2006 that was awsome I'm usaully at the wrestling section but I saw the movie again maybe my third time watching it so I wanted to see if they had pearl harbor here and I was right well that fic was awsome you rule-chow |
| Lee the boy in blue box chapter 1 . 10/31/2006 very good,I like it a lot but (Don't take this the wrong way) it needs a bit of work. Would you like my help? if you do I think you need talk more about her feelings. How did feel when Danny came toward her? or did she react when Danny began undressing her? What did the ground feel they were laying on? If work out a a few more detils you will a wonderful story. best wishes |
