Lol! That was funny.

Thanks for the laugh I really needed some humor in my life today!

I love the way she teases and plays! and How Mal gets her to behave and listen!

Good Job thanks for sharing!

That was adorable :)

awwww

Don't like the overt romantic implications between Mal/River. Other than that shiny.

Mad

So cute!

This is so cute!

Awesome awesome why aren\t you writing this kind of stuff anymore_ I know the show\s been cancelled for ages but still, even Nathan Fillion has trouble letting it go...lol

I love you r writing and have followed your Dark Angel days /something I still hope will reactivate in you hehe / and will continue to like your writing as long as our fandoms coincide.

Thanks for this anyway!

Happy writing

ditte mai

denmark

*giggles* Shiny!

Thanks for writing.

absolutly loved this story :] you have done an awsome job, good work xoxox

Absolutely great story! I rarely have such fun while reading, I had the feeling that the story just kind of wrote itself, hilarious, smart and well-written! Also, MR is always a plus. Great job!

You know this demands a part II and I from two perspectives. Zoe's perspective and most definitely River's. Admittedly I found this fic made River a tad bit too childish it was however very inciteful on how to handle a young girl who speaks in rhymes and riddles. It's a great read however aand I really hope you take up my challenges to add a few more chapters to older fics or at least bring in some new work. You're a wonderful writer if you come back to the fold or not because again I loved this like many of your other Mal/River fics I've reviewed. I plan on reviewing whatever else you have left.

So cute! Loved it.

LOL! OMG! Dissecting jayne sounds like SO much fun! River was hilarious!

-as always, plugging... I would love it if you'd r and r my DA fic- btw, love the left behind series!

Conversations with children are rarely boring... What a wonderful place the world could be if we could see the world through the eyes of a child, but with the maturity of an adult? A contradiction in and of itself, no?

- Liz