Reviews for Welcome to Toontown
Reviewer chapter 22 . 11/10/2012
Finally finished reading

Pros: Original and intertaining story.
Jimmy Neatron and Bart Simpson IN THE SAME BOOK!
CARTMAN IS IN IT OMGOMGOMGOMG
Cons: The story lacks detail in some parts.
Grammer and Spelling mistakes.
Story can get a bit confusing
Score - 7/10 Great Story!
Regular show fanatic chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Hey I'm just asking but can I adopt any stories from anyone? Im gonna make my first fanfict and I want to get ideas
DsCRD09842R chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Interesting chapter, however I would like to carry out one of my stories, you can claim them as your own if you want.

Jimmy Neutron discovers a totally different universe from the ones he viewed each mission, soon, he zooms through the portals, however, he's stuck in that new unvierse, thankfully, several other characters from the other universes got stuck and now find a way to escape.

The characters are:

Nick- 16-year-old high school kid, smart, caring and at times, overly-optimistic. He is responsible and has a good sense of humour

Butch- 16 and-a-half year old high schooler, plays violin and is especially smart

Zack- 15 year old high schooler, notrious grades, caring, however, his pranks often get him too far.

Summer- 17 year old high school kid, Nick's crush.

Dauman- 16 and a half year old high school kid, Nick's bully

Summer- 39 and four-fifth year old father who is president of Nickelodeon (in this universe it's a country)

However, Sin will not be involved, however, it would be kind of funny to see him get blamed!

Good luck, fellow writer, keep that crossover heart within ya'.
Shabon Flurry chapter 5 . 5/10/2007
Whatcha cute love song! But I can't wait to see you post "The Hawaiian Witch". You must know that I LOVE Ojamajo Doremi. So hurry up, and publish THW!
Shabon Flurry chapter 3 . 4/17/2007
I have five letters for you: S-U-G-O-I! But like the evil exo-skin said, "You saw nothing", 'cause you're the best friend ever! Keep moving on!
NonSequiturs-R-Us chapter 22 . 1/3/2007
That was so freakin' awesome! I loved every single chapter especially the ones with the song parodies. It's a shame that you're not going to do a sequel yourself, but with the way you ended it, I don't think there's a need for one. Anyway, keep up the great work and I'll be looking for your next story soon!
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 22 . 12/26/2006
Excellent ending. Very good action scenes and exchanges.

Keep the good writing.
dannyfangirl chapter 22 . 12/23/2006
AWESOME! :D
jfiehsdgsdgsdgsgdsjhifhi chapter 20 . 12/20/2006
WOW! The next part is going to be AWESOME! Your story is great, nicktoons841!
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 17 . 12/16/2006
Great job in these chapters. Nice stuff with all the characters.

Keep the good writing.
srtty chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
put in the yakko wakko and dot to make things more funny dont hurt bart in the end he is my fav make him underchontrol sorry i spelled it wrong by Organization 13 and have bart change his ways in the end and do the kill kenny line by
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 11 . 12/10/2006
Good chapter. Man, Stewie really messed up Jimmy's brain!

Keep the good writing, and Merry Christmas.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 10 . 12/4/2006
The Futurama crew! Cool!

Keep the good writing.
jfiehsdgsdgsdgsgdsjhifhi chapter 3 . 12/4/2006
Nice idea! I'm making a Fan-fiction that involes Timmy and Bart knowing each-other. I was amazed to find out that somebody else had my idea!

Keep up the good work! And if you can do a song, have something like your version of "It's Our House Now!" from Mickey's House of Villains.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 9 . 12/3/2006
Funny musical number! Nice touch about having Brandy here.

Keep the good writing.
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