| Reviews for Lily the Waitress |
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  Guest chapter 20 . 6/27 That was great I became teary...Oh who am I kidding I am drowning in my tears. |
 quoth-the-ravenclaw chapter 20 . 12/9/2017 Amazing! A bit of a slow start, with a few grammatical errors, but it really picked up after the reveal. James's anger was great, and ouch, that last chapter really stung. I love to see a fanfic writer who grows and improves, and you certainly have! I wasn't a huge fan of the overall plot (I lean more toward mystery/adventure romances and not dramas/fluffy ones) but this story is unique and clever, and there are some really profound bits woven in. The Remus/Lily friendship was great. I can't stop thinking about that "forever extends after death" line you had there. Great job and hope you keep writing! |
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/25/2017 Wow. |
| Broweyesandhair chapter 2 . 12/12/2016 Wow so it seems James will always be attracted to lily even in hiding. Great chapter! |
| Broweyesandhair chapter 1 . 12/12/2016 So did she really break up with James or just disappear from him. Great start I can't wait to see where you take it! |
| LanieHallows chapter 20 . 2/14/2016 Wow... This is truly one of my favorite Jily stories, no favorite stories, I've ever read, and I've read a lot of Jily stories, USALLY only Jily stories... Anyway, this story was truly amazing and I loved it very much! I was entertained the whole way through because your plot line was very interesting, again, loved it :) When I say this was one of my favorites, I truly mean it. It is not just because I love the pairing, but because you took a different approach on Jily, that I have not seen done before, so it was, is, something new and extraordinary to me. Thank you for writing this amazing story, you're amazing :) |
| Akamarackus chapter 1 . 4/26/2015 Ooh... Poor heartbroken James... Lily... Jily has been torn apart... |
| lizzardsneek chapter 20 . 12/24/2014 Wow |
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/21/2014 My heart just broke a little in my gut and i cried a whole bunch in my eyes. Naww. The feels. Great story. |
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/25/2014 I'm tearing up *sniff sniff* T-T this is so bittersweet. It's so sad but so sweet and fluffy at the same time. great job on this fic it was an amazing read! Beautifully written. |
| Thesa chapter 20 . 4/30/2014 I loved reading your story :-) Thank you for sharing :-) |
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/18/2014 2 words LOVED IT |
| Bookshelflover394 chapter 20 . 1/25/2014 Loved the ending! Such a great story! |
| blueeyedbeauty123 chapter 20 . 2/10/2013 :,( *sob, sob* so sad |
| Diane Potter chapter 20 . 5/17/2012 The last forever's make my skin crawl and chills run down my arms, it was extremely perfect. Love it, hope I read you soon. Regards, Diane Potter. |
