Cool Story! Good Job!)

Hey, author! I'm so glad I came across this story. I'm so tired of AH fics. But anyway, I'm gonna recommend you two. "Take The Ice" by bellamarie117 which has a Skaterella!Hockeyward pairing. It's fun to read. And the second one is The Hills Of Twilight. It's... angsty? I think. I dunno if you've read them already but I like those fics.

By the way, this is my first review in this story. I can't help but think, "Maybe Willis would betray along with Logan so they can get Bella and Ariella" and I kept thinking that Bella and Ariella would be somehow related by blood (no pun) like, Bella's a descendant or something. And then by what Bella saw when she touched Willis' hands, feels to me as if he could control others by mind, considering the way you described Harrison when W whispered in his ear. And Logan... is plain creepy. I think B should touch his hand. He's defiantly keeping a secret. Maybe Logan and Willis are brothers but they're hiding it? And then they would team up. But I can't think of any power Logan may possess. Maybe he could make others fall in love with him too? But I think it will be a long process because based on what B heard on his mind, it's like he's already started that process. And I'm really bothered by Willis. Wait, lemme go back on a few chapters... Here it is! I'm gonna quote it:

"I could see Willis sitting alone on his bed. He was looking at his hands, pounding them into one another trying to release the tension and dull ache coursing through his hands. Harrison entered the room and stood in front of his looking at Willis intently. The vision was mute so I couldn't hear what they were saying but I could see their mouths moving. Harrison said something to Willis and Willis replied slowly. Harrison mouthed the word 'No' and a scowl spread across Willis' face. He stood up and pointed to the door. Harrison still didn't move, he just folded his arms over his chest with an angry expression on his boyish face. Willis dropped his hands and looked intently at Harrison, still not saying anything but with a concentrated look on his face. At once Harrison unfolded his arms and they fell limp as his sides. Harrison held a politely confused look on his face but his eyes were glazed over and unfocussed. Willis stood up and slowly prowled around Harrison murmuring words in his ears. Harrison looked faintly bored yet still listening intently. He nodded and walked out the room without a word. Willis walked in front of the mirror and studied his reflection, he raised his hands and studied his palms before the vision faded."

There! Okay, one question. Is the Adrian the only one left to have a new power yet? Willis got his, and now I'm wondering what it is.

Two words for you, Ms. Author. And I'm gonna spell it out.

U-P-D-A-T-E S-O-O-N

UPDATE SOON!

I'm really bothered. PLEASE!

P.S. I hope you don't mind the long (longest I ever typed, yet) review.

P.S.S. I'm waiting for the update!

I love this story! I can't wait for the next one.

hope you update soon! :) it was amazing! cant wait to find out what happens next

great fic! I just found it, and didn't stop reading until you finished. Its brilliant. Can u please update soon.

Latz

Xxxx...

Love this chapter. ARe you planning to add more chapters to this story? Hope So!

ah i love this story! its amazing! :)

please post more soon! i wanna know what happens next! :)

Wow... great story...

But I really don't want Bella with Edward...

Well not so easily

Great story but Pls pls pls update soon!

Wow, I know this story is a few years old, but will you be finishing it? I just now came across it. Good story!

this is really great!

i love this story so far and i cant wait for you to update!

bella is so weak on chapter 2&3 make her more confident and less embarrassing for herself

that was a fantastic story !

IM REALLY LOVING THIS STORY RIGHT NOW