either update or add a sequel please

That was perfect!

There's a good story here, I think. Somewhere. It needs work in terms of pacing, and you need a better beta for spellchecks and stuff. But the premise is there and that's the important part. Hopefully a few years after you completed this, you'll decide to revise it with your improved writing skills and matured experience.I bet it'll be a hit.

YOU'RE A HEXIAN AAAHHHH

I'm not active any more, but I lived and breathed Hex for several years. Yay youuuu 3

Also I am pretty sure Hermione had pigtails in the beginning of the chapter (it was cute how Draco immediately tugged oneboys only pull the pigtails of girls they like, how kindergarten) but by the time they kiss she has a pony tail?

I like the banter, but the verbs look like they were slathered on with shiftf7. So much screaming and yelling and hollering going on, between just two people, in a small room, and neither of them are angry or dying, or even doing anything particularly exciting, just flirting rather mildly...

I so love this story. Every chapter was riveting. I could not put this down.

uugghhhhh now I really want a sequel! Don't leave us hanging! loved this so much I read it all in a day

Thank you for writing and sharing this story, very enjoyable!

I'm really enjoying the concept of this story, its the first one like it that I've read

I have a hard time believing Hermione would keep allowing Draco to talk to her like that without hexing him half a dozen times already.

Will you make the sequel? I hope you will

This Draco is so cute

So from all I can decipher from this story is that Lucius raped Hermione and Draco oblivated it from her then proceeded to treat her like dirt - mudblooded dirt - and Hermione fell for it because he broke her mind.

wow.