do you mean sannin cause that's what tsunade jiraiya and orochimaru are

For the best it's been abandoned, he's FAR too weak. Kishimoto's canon is absolute garbage.

You're stupid you can't make another story so you follow canon and TRIED to make a dark naruto along with it but IT JUST ISN'T WORKING cuz YOU'RE STUPID!

You have to be mentally challenged to think this would actually be a good story... please check yourself into a hospital I am worried for your health.

Great job shame you stopped writing the story

"rift raft" ? Bwahaha, what the fuck is that ?

Poor little dumbfuck doesnt know what spellchecking is. Sad, really.

Replying to reviews is not against the rules...it's just incredibly stupid and awfully annoying.

I really like the Kyubi here.

Hey , I loved this story , was really disappointed that you gave it up , the other Author didn't even go anywhere with it , if the mood strikes you at any point please continue this story I would really like to see it updated

... you made him have a sister?

Nah-uh. Nope. I’m out. Bye.

Holy Shit that was so Pathetic. PLEASE DELETE THIS SHIT!

This is a nice story but I was really hoping that Naruto would not come back and everybody else him alone and he would cut all ties to the leaf.

kakashi fired up a chidori, aiming to hit something/someone else, and rin at the time was the Jinchūriki of the sanbi (three tails), and wanted to be free of the burden, (so basically rinnyboi here got suicidal up on us) and jumped in front of the chidori and boom ded

Wtf are you bipolar you crazy author at one moment naruto was saying i hate this village for all i care BURN DOWN then the next i love the village wow your truly a crazy bipolar author