NIce story...bro...pls update soon cant wait...

Make more story pretty good

then write it man it has been 3 4 years now come on if you dont want to keep the story i really like it then give it to some one else come on

Hey why do you all just go on what you see your shinobi so see underneath the underneath naruto is just pretending

Ooooh ino likes shikamaru huh

What reputation do you have tsunade

Uh oh well you can only push some one to far

Hey why does Sasuke have more power than naruto huh

Well this will be an interesting relationship

you stopped writing this? ...aw...it was such a good story...unlike some of the NaruTay pairings...

torqued you called it quits, not a bad story at all. good grammar, spelling, meshing, plotline, dialogue, etc. just short, and unfinished.

I'm really, really enjoying this story, especially watching how Naruto and Tayuya's personalities bounce off each other.

I hope you're still meaning to update it some time. :)

just read your profile note, sad but at least you came out with it not many authors who stop on their fics actually say they stopped, so thats great. it will be missed

Hey nice story i really like tayuya by the way the plot is good and well i think its not enough please please update it soon i like to read a new chapter

Interesting... Sakon wears make up... very interesting...

I really like this. Has it been discontinued. The best line: " I might not be the best ninja in the village, but at least nothing I've ever done will keep me up at night screaming at my dreams."

good stuff. i like it. i hope to see more soon.