I can not continue reading this shit. This story is awful.

I am not saying you are a bad writer but the plot you choose is completely awful. This cannot be a Ron/Hermione story.

They are too out of character. Even Harry and Ginny are terribly portrayed.

This was completely out of character of Hermione. She just cannot do this. One time drunken mistake is understandable but this. But this was terrible.

It was really important for you to explain why Hermione cheated on Ron for five months but all she says is 'she doesn't know. It was a mistake. She loves Ron more than her life.' and the next moment she is shagging another bloke. Wow, you made me hate her so much. But I was very intrigued to know the real reason why she cheated in the first place. I thought she has lusted with a potion or something but you made it clear that she cheated on Ron on her free will.

This is too out of character for the Hermione we all know and love. Hell, she has a chance and still, she does not date Krum because she fancies Ron and don't know he fancies her back or not.

And Ron is pathetic here. This is not Ron at all. The Ron we all know is impulsive and hot-tempered. Hell, the whole Lavender crap is because Hermione kisses a bloke two years ago. He just cannot let just forgive her because she carries his baby. He never backs off until he gets an understandable explanation. He never leaves his Auror dream and allows Hermione to follow hers after all this. I will be pleased if he had shags another girl back in the summer. It seems somewhat correct to me. And I did like to see Hermione reaction to this.

You wanted to write a story where a girl cheated on her boyfriend for months the get pregnant with his baby and they eventually end up together. And it was simply that you decided to use Ron and Hermione for this. And this is awful. There is not any description of magic, no Voldemort. It was just a story of two teenagers and you named them Ron and Hermione. And I am quite sure that if you just replace Ron and Hermione with any other names. The story remains the same.

At last, I only understand just one thing. You wanted to write a breakup and then a forced patch up story. It was awful. I just wish that you did not use Ron and Hermione to fulfil your story.

Thank You.

If I were ron I would slap her and told her to fuck off.

I am laughing hysterically. She is shagging a boy who despises ron. And she is saying she LOVES ron more than her life... lmao xD
I hope she will kill herself soon. Ron deserves a perfect girl. Not a Slut like her.

Ron is right it is her fault.

Hermione cheats on Ron for 5 months for no reason and she has the audicity to be angry at him bec he doesn't believe it's his child?

Hermione thinks she loves Ron after cheating for 5 months with a slytherin and then gives it a last go before ending it?

You cannot just write anything in the name of ''imperfect Hermione".

Horrible plot. Period.

Abandoning at chapter 3.

Horrible fic. One of the most hateful Hermione I ever read.

You are the fantastic writer. I love your story...greattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

Not too sure if you are still reading your reviews but I will leave a short one. First off let me say that you are a really good writer and some of your dialog scenes are first rate. You do have a talent in getting under the skins of the readers and that's a testemant to your writing.

However as a lot of your reviewers have commented, this story suffers completely because of the unexplainable actions of Hermione with Paul in the beginning. I cannot for the life of me understand this and you have made absolutely no effort to explain it other than for Hermione to say that she also does not know how or why it happened. Unfortunately the whole relationship between her and Ron suffers afterwards ...at least to me and as such I have lost interest. Sorry

no not a fairy tale,not unless we are talking the 'fair folk' and a tale of warning. No more like one of the old harlequin romances. a villain who keeps trying to break up a pair of lovers. for his own agenda.
still it reads better than those ever did (never lose a bet with a girl, it might have you reading crap)

Ch7 very funny warning from Hermione to Ginny and Harry.
Cute story.

Very realistic Ron reaction to Hermione's cheating.

She said she wanted to discuss it. Did you research abortion laws in the U.K.? I know in the Y.S. they make you wait a period of time. My point is that the doctor wouldn't just set up the appointment for her.

This story just feels like pro-life propaganda, to me.

Great story. I'm going to the sequel now. Just out of curiosity, what happened to the events of the 7th book?

Great name!