Reviews for Deepest River
mtnikolle chapter 16 . 6/20/2013
This is a really fascinating story! I hope you are able to come back and continue it one day. :)
Janey-Paininator chapter 16 . 5/3/2012
Noooo This can't be the last chapter... NOOOO Please update really really soon and with more chapters. I was really gettting into this Fan Fic. I want to know what is going on with the Other Host Members during the War. Whose the Father of the baby and so forth. So UPDATE SOON PLEASE
Sky chapter 16 . 5/13/2010
WOW! This is FABULOUS! I Love it so much! I love how you have kyoyaxharuhi love with tamakixharuhi. Although, have you've given up on this fic? Is that really the end or do you have writers block? I do hope you continu though! This is an UH-MAZING piece of work!
DarkRavie chapter 16 . 7/13/2009
So, Haruhi is pregnant. Who's the daddy? Kyouya or Tamaki? I do hope it's Kyouya's. Why did Kyouya go out of his way to pick up Haruhi in Japan in the first place? I don't think that was really answered. I look forward to reading your next chapter.
music4ruth chapter 2 . 6/24/2009
I like the plot of this story. It sets it apart from the other fanfics I've recently read. The part about WWI. Well, I think that the only mistake was here:

He watched her as she breathed gently. He got annoyed, not being able to move now, in case of waking her up. Books and movies always said girls slept with smiles on their faces, enticing those around them, but Haruhi had now smile, just a resting expression that told so much about her with just that alone.

Should it be?:

"...but Haruhi had no smile, just a resting expression that told so much about her with just that alone."
ireadtoomanybooks chapter 16 . 2/14/2009
Wow! This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Scratch that, it IS the best story. Absolutely amazing. Your age? um anything from 16 to 30... It's romantic, and sweet, but slightly angsty... nope, not angsty... sad it is the word I'm looking for... kind of. Anyways. Exquisite! You wanna know how old I am? I'll PM you XD
MimikoTaeyon chapter 16 . 10/26/2008
Thinking about what kind of language you use in your stories and all that. I think your in your twenties or something..

But I'm so bad at guessing someone's age.. I'm afraid I guess them to old O_O

I think you live in.. America?

The world is to big to guess I think XD.

I'm 16 years old and from The Netherlands.. Which probably is unknown to you XD
JMai chapter 16 . 10/12/2008
I'm really curious as to how Haruhi and Tamaki got separated, but I'm sure all will be explained in the near future. Great work on the chapter, I love the sweet moments that wasn't senseless fluff...it gave it a much more 'real' feel to it.

As to your question, I'm a 20 yr old...and I think you're either in your late 20's or early 30's...am I even close? ;) lol
Charlie Bucket chapter 16 . 10/5/2008
i think you're...18 and from Britain? i'm 16 from britain, live in the usa. I LOVE YOUR STORY!
Cereza671 chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
By the way this story reminds me of Atonement in a way with a clash of pearlharbor l0l two friends who love the same girl. . .or should I say mutiple friends l0l
Cereza671 chapter 16 . 10/2/2008
okay u r incredibly evil . . .i just spent a couple of hours reading this whole story only to be left hanging- barely able to hold on mind u-on a cliff hanger. . . .I LOVE IT! but i must know what happend to the twins WHERE IS MORI AND HUNNY? AND WHAT ABOUT KYOUYA? WHOS THE BABY"S FATHER? IT HAS TO BE KYOUYA! I love this story plz update soon please!
MistressMizu chapter 15 . 9/30/2008
Thank you for another exquisite chapter! You're such a talented writer and it's always showing through with each and every chapter.

I know it isn't right to assume anything, but giving the circumstances I suppose the child is Tamaki's. But then... If she's so early into her pregnancy and it seems even longer than she hasn't been with him... Ah, I'll still leave it at Tamaki for now. I don't think she'd want to abort the baby. At least not if it's someone's she loves.

Thank you again and I can't wait until I can find out more!
Charlie Bucket chapter 15 . 9/28/2008
AW! PLEASE don't take so long updating this time! i love this story!
MistressMizu chapter 14 . 6/27/2008
I haven't left a review for anyone in quite a while so I figured I should start with you, since you've put up the most lovely chapter. I suppose lovely isn't exactly the word to use though, considering what is happening. Thank you so much for continuing with this story! It really means a lot to me, and probably to others also. I think this has a lot of potential still, and I'm in the dark as to where you're taking this. I can't wait to read more!
Charlie Bucket chapter 14 . 6/21/2008
I'm really liking this story. You're very talented. I'm getting really into it lol. You updated so fast, it made me happy. Update soon :D.
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