haha love it

O-M-freaking-G! I never thought of this, but Gary *would* have been the one to figure them out... and incorrectly, at that! Oh boy... I'm seriously giggling so hard my family's staring at me. I always laughed at this part in the book, but your addition makes the scene even funnier! D Well done, well done indeed.

*cackles* What a shock for Gary! But good on him for keeping Alan's 'secret'.

This is awesome.

This. Is. Genius. I love Gary's character and really wish they had more of him in TPs other books... And his reaction...! Hilarious!

Rofl. This is one of my favourite scenes in the book, and I liked reading it from Gary's perspective.

I'm slowly working my way through all your stories! I loved this one; it just sounds like Gary!

I'm loving the Cavall's Heart stories too, are there going to be anymore in the arch, or do you think they're done?

Lisa x

hahahahahhahah, gotta love gary, at one point i thought he was gay. hahaha he just acts so camp.

LOVE IT! Such a different and interesting take on two different classic storylines.

~Vampiremuggle

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Wonderfully done :)

cutesi (idk if spelling is rite it's pronounced cute-c as in the letter c)

I don't know why I've only come across this one-shot now. But I'm glad that I did - it was simply wonderful, in that Gary-is-wonderful way. The best part of the whole piece was how you tied it in to canon. Great work!

Fabulous! This is so well-woven with the material from the original book , it reads as though it really could have happened this way. Loved it! :D

I can't help it,

I just love it!

loved it!loved it!