Reviews for The Breaking of Hermione Granger
Skatious chapter 5 . 10/30/2013
It's fantastic !
fawnsfreedom chapter 5 . 12/31/2012
Amazing story so far! It's very dark but very good! I love how it's historically accurate and I think you made a good choice to go with Tolga. It suits the character so far. I think the readers really appreciate the German as well, it is much easier to read and understand (however that could just be me). The writing style is fantastic! Do you have a beta reader? Either way I applaud you! Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter!
Saphira.Flametongue chapter 5 . 9/10/2011
Oh gosh. Your words and descriptions are so powerful, so vivid. I kept crying as I was reading the story. I could feel the anguish and the heartbreak. It's beautifully written (:
jabbathehutt chapter 5 . 11/24/2010
"Only the dead were free anymore."

Quite possibly the most beautiful piece of fiction I've ever read from this site. Everything was so hauntingly beautiful. I'm in awe of what you've written here, honestly, and I hope you'll continue soon. I noticed you haven't updated in a while, but I'll still hope for it. And I'd like to think, that if they can't manage to save anyone else from that torture, that Hermione would at least get to see Harry one last time. I'd imagine that would be quite the scene. When I read what Harry did for her right before they came to take them, I nearly cried. It was all so sad. You're brilliant, you know. Should be proud of you've written here. Even if it's missing an ending.
findingloyalties chapter 5 . 8/20/2010
When i first read this I was shell-shocked, but now I see through the horrible gut-wrenching detail. What I saw was a story with cruel perfection; this story is beautiful in a way that is just so dark. Although I won't go as far as to say I loved it i have to say I am in awe.
Los Grotos chapter 2 . 7/19/2010
Hope is the most cruel torment.
Los Grotos chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
The good guys always lose.
GothicYandere95 chapter 5 . 3/17/2010
This is so sad! Makes me cry a little too... I hope Hermione is saved, and everyone else. Plz write the next chapter whenever you can!
Colbie Caprice chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
I just loved it!

CC -x-
anonymus chapter 5 . 4/11/2009
me again; please, please, please do more of this story, it is amazing!
FreeWolfBlue chapter 5 . 3/8/2009
really awesome story! I hope you update soon. I know its been like 2 years, but a girl can hope right?
anonymus chapter 5 . 2/26/2009
Good greif! UPDATE!
anonymus chapter 5 . 2/8/2009
OMG,WRITE MORE! I'M DYING FOR MORE OF THIS STORY!
krum'sloffer chapter 5 . 1/11/2009
me again: GAH! GOING INSANE! PLEASE UPDATE!
Viktor'sLoffer chapter 5 . 12/22/2008
is amazing,both horrific and beautiful!please update,for me if not for anyone else!
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