Great story showing the conflict between soldier and healer; written so well it was hard to take sides.

Brilliant. Poor Carson. I loved the line "Thank god they didn't have to pay insurance or else they'd be in the high, high risk pool." LOL! How true.

That was brilliant! You write these characters so well! Well done :) I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your stories!

A brilliant story! Very good and very well written! I've enjoyed every line of the read. Your characterizations were spot-on.

Thank you so much for sharing!

Excellent tag! Poor Carson! :)

It looks like season three is showing us that anything goes for the team. They can experiment, torture, nuke planets and we are still to believe that they are the good guys, but the Wraith feed to survive and they are evil monsters. Its nice to see that Carson at least has regrets about what he has done.

I loved this tag - filled in a few gaps in a very believable way.

Yah. Once you start like a Nazi, there is no escape.

That was simply...amazing. Well done Wraithfodder! Now this is why I call fanfiction an art form.

"Nervous eating. John was hungry too. Couldn't remember when he'd last had a decent sleep, last time he'd had more than one bite of one of those gluey bars, or hadn't felt trapped on a razor's edge from the ever-increasing escalation of the disaster that was unfolding."

That was brilliant. Such an intelligent, strong piece; just the tag that was missing from this ep. Your John was so in character that I could hear his voice in my head while reading his thoughts.

Thank you. This one is a keeper.

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Wow...that was a bit intense - I liked how you focused on each of the characters, at least their reactions.

I must say, I was stunned after the second episode of season 3. Is it me, or is John and co becoming more ruthless? They seem to have little or no problem with blowing up planets.

Well, anyway, nice one-shot there, definitely covered all the aspects - and I liked when he realized he had cloaked the jumper - lol. Nice job!

Hm, that was interesting. Not your best written piece, but not bad or anything. I think you got the characters' reactions right. Poor Carson...

Wow, this was just so good. :o)

Ooh, wow! That was heartbreaking. Poor Carson, poor John... This was a perfect ending to the episode. So awful because Carson wanted desperately to save those people and in the end they had to be killed. Excellent work. You really captured their emotions perfectly, and I could understand and read just how devestated and, well, emotional they all were. Thank you for posting that. I enjoyed reading your fic.

but mostly, for what the wraith might have taken away from Carson.. and the sad fact, as he began to pummel the bag, he wasn't sure what that was.

Exactly. I also like John commenting about their men, Morrison's niece and that true cost of trying to save those Wraith. Nicely done; great John voice throughout.

Very interesting theory, I hadn't even thought of that as being a possibility of what torture method they would use . . . but that makes sense . . . will have to see where they take it in the show, but some more fan fiction on that theory and it's repurcusions could be fun : ) hope to see more on this front . . . Especially some more carson, with perhaps some rodney/carson bonding which you seem to be setting up so nicely . . . keep up the good work!