This was a wonderful story. While some have complained about what happens to Kelly it was the core idea behind the story. The story is harsh, reminding us that not all endings are happy but the storytelling is exceptionally well done. Superman is so humanly relatable in this story showing discomfort, anger, remorse, sadness and many more. You have succeeded in the Art of Telling a Story, making us Think and making us Feel. Added to my Favorites. :)

Wow, that was ridiculously good. I’m really blown away. I was having so much experiencing this wild concept I’d never considered. Wonder Woman and Kelly’s conversation was just the best thing.

It was jarring in an impressive way when it went tragedy.

Thanks, I appreciate the read. I’m definitely looking into your other works.

Aww sad justice league

Well shit
Great work

I... kinda gotta agree with everyone who didn't like the ending. You started with a great point, and wrote a compelling and interesting character in a very humanizing way. It was wonderful, and had this story ended three scenes before it did, it would have been perfect.

Then you had to pull a "martha!", and ruin all that buildup.

That was pretty good. :)

This was very nice. I think it hits all the emotional spots, and tells a good story. Good job!

hardly be a porn star easily with her resulting disfigurement, hero or no. It would’ve made for a nice recovery arc, and allow the League to see her as a brave and sacrificing person, open up possibilities of more bonding moments like what she had with Wonder Woman, maybe even finally get that official stamp of approval from Batman, and let her live with full confidence and no regrets, assured in her role as a person and hero. Even without that, a rescue and survival would've simply been a more fitting ending for the character you crafted so greatly, instead of mercilessly slaughtering her. I know this was written well over a decade ago, and it’s quite possible you’ve either forgotten completely about it, changed your mind, or both. I usually don’t leave reviews, either-I just wanted to get my thoughts out. You are a good writer and storyteller, but in this case, the desire for overdone drama damaged an otherwise-excellent story. Good job, and keep writing. And one last thing: if I may be so presumptuous to assume that you may want to contact me for whatever reason, I’m on tumblr at determinedlearningcrusade. Sorry it’s not the most accessible, but I don’t quite feel comfortable giving out more personal things online. Besides, if you don’t care, just ignore it! Simple as that.

Okay. First off: this was a good story. Excellent writing as usual, great development, overall amusing story and engaging character. Decent conflicts, both with allies and enemies, with the nice addition of having her be powerful but very much not invincible, avoiding the Mary Sue cliche. Characters are fairly fleshed out, and I personally think even those without much background on the canon heroes would still get a decent handle on them. Then the ending. It works well as a twist and a tragic reality shock, but I personally think the story doesn’t need it. If you had given this a happier ending, one where she survives-possibly even using the setup of Batman’s powerless combat training from before-continues her life, and becomes the hero she has been working towards, the story would be truly satisfying and great. Instead, it’s just a good story with a frustrating ending. Unfortunately, the well-written, strong, self-reliant, likable, and unconventional female, nearly average if it weren’t for her powers, ends up a bloody mess at the hands of some unnamed cult and a two-bit thug. It sort of undercuts the whole arc of someone like her becoming a hero in her own right, others’ ideas be damned. Now, instead of a triumphant tale of success, it’s a tragedy of a girl who tried her best but ultimately couldn’t last. I understand-at least somewhat-how you were trying to bring the arc around with her being proven to be a true hero in death, the League members honoring her, and accepting her and her friends... but it could’ve easily happened without killing her off. Rather than brutally murder her, she could’ve escaped with life and limb, if with mental and physical scars. It would’ve made a more compelling story and given room for a follow up-after all, she could hard

Don't think this has aged very well

Good story...

:(

Also this is aimed at Fitoor who reviewed earlier than me: while your point is valid I feel that I must point out that, in context at least, said distribution was solely out of profit rather than... in her memory I suppose. To me at least that they, in stopping Danni's agent, was to keep her name from being debased in the name of profiteering under the guise of 'honoring' her.

This is amazingly written. Well done author.

a most interesting and unique fic.

I understand that this fic tried to give some sort of a lesson, that you don't need to be a princess or a millionaire or a journalist to be a hero. But it kinda contradicted itself near the end. Like when Supes implied that regardless of her profession in life she died a hero, or when they stopped her agent from distributing her videos. From what I understood, Kelly loved her work and would've been all for being more successful even after death. It kind of missed the point that Kelly was not a Hero despite being a Pornstar. Just both simultaneously.