man, the story started so well then it just became weird. the sudden mystery and missing pieces in the story and with how you left it just made the story unsatisfying. thank you for the first 9 or so chapters, I enjoyed them.

This was a strange story

OH SHIT

good story to start then it turned weird. I'm guessing she was pregnant then had a miscarrage during the battle that's all the blood.

You are sooooooo evil with all the secrets and mysteries. BUT , I love it. Great Job

sorry but now i hate you

i burst out laughing while on the train reading this now everyone thinks im strange

I just found this story and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it. I know you probably won't be updating it, but I just wanted to let you know that you did great work!

update soon!

I was reading your story & i really enjoyed it & was on the edge of my seat but when i read the Author's note & you told of your divorce i have to say that i understand how you feel i'm going through one myself & know how much it hurt even when you have children i do wish you luck but if you need anyone to talk to you can always write to me... :)

I've only read the first two chapters but i thought i'd tell you that i've already had enough due to all the kakashi bashing, i mean your writting style is fine but really its all a bit overdramatic, not every girl is obsessed about 1 year aniverseries, well sakura i undersatnd but certainly not all the other characters ganging up on kakashi, it just made them OOC and frankly hard to read without rolling my eyes

I am sorry to here that you are having issues and that it is taking out the fun in writing, I love this story, it is one of the ones that got me into fanfiction. If ever you do start to update again I will be one of your more avid/rabid readers and will probably review every chapter if not just to say how much I like it lol.

I like that it is sasuke that tells him "the deepest" funniest momement in chapter 2, well here I go to 3! So far I am loving the story :)

I like where this story is heading. It's not a usual plot and I love who characters like Hinata and Ino are further enhanced instead of being made into wussy characters you usually find.

I do hope that you will be able to come back and continue writing as you seem to have a gift for it.

lololol...

Kakashi, you really are forgetful.