It was so interesting! Thanks for writing and sharing this.

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you so much.

I think I read this a while ago, but I gladly read it again! You have mastered the Sheppard-Rodney bickering! it just made me happy :-)

I did identify one of the bad guys, but this was a great read, loved the originality, and you nailed the characters, truly enjoyed the snarkiness.

Holy shit, that was some 1st class whumpage! You really had me worried about Zelenka for a while and it was nice to see more of Caldwell - I have a soft spot for Mitch Pileggi and he fills a pair of overalls nicely ;-) Really enjoyable and well plotted fic.

Awesome fic...great characterization and pacing...thanks for sharing! )

My favorite part of this story is imagining them plowing through the snow whilst in a blizzard. Fun times! And that moment where Rodney saved Sheppard was priceless! This story is truely a work of art. ;) V.

likes this one a lot.
as if a double series looked
thanks you 3

This was amazing. I loved it so, so much. It had everything, angst and god guys winning and everyone was in character. I also loved your original characters, which I respect, because that's so hard to pull off in fandom, but you did, spectacularly. Rodney's interactions with everyone is perfect. I love his breakdown and his stubbornness. I was sad when this was over, it was like the show ended all of a sudden. I could honestly, seriously, see this as one of the SGA novels. Really, this deserves to be published. I can think of no other response than I loved this so much, I have the inexplicable urge to write fanfics within your fic. Thank you for this amazing story. I was such a pleasure to read.

That was a very nice eulogy from Sheppard. Sounds in-character to me.

Good internal dialogue for McKay, liked his snarkiness and analysis of his own thoughts.

Noooo! You killed Rodney!?

What an exciting and thrilling adventure, this story has been up till now! I didn't see the betrayal in the snow coming. But it feels good to have Beckett look after Radek, and Elizabeth going back to Atlantis. I hope Rodney and Caldwell will keep each other safe out there... John better find them quick.

Whoa! Evil woman! Somebody please save Elizabeth!

Rodney is being Rodney. And I understand what you say about being cold, fearful and worried. It's how he operates. Your Radek/Rodney dialogue is very good. I also liked the way you wrote some of your original characters, like Keisha and Dr. Ling. Interesting to see Carol clash with Rodney so badly. I also enjoyed how you described Caldwell. Although the Atlantis team had problems with him in the past, I do believe there is a reluctant respect between them. I hope to see Sheppard reach the crashsite soon!