This is beautiful.

Simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.

That was cute.

Omg, that was so, very very beautifully written.

I especially adore the ending, where the angst is subtle but powerful. I also like the "calm-before-storm" part; very nicely put. Overall, a short-story well-done

Aw, that was so cute. I'm not leaning either way in terms of Kurogane's choice of mate (odd word, but others escape me), but this one was absolutely adorable.

Watch your spelling and spacing, but that's about it. It's very nice and really captures the moments when a person wakes up in the morning. Good job!

So fluffy yet so angsty! This takes talent! You've done a wonderful job! Although it's not exactly how I imagine it, this was beautifully written and so...raw! I love it!

~B.T.A. Ria-Chan is adjusting chairs

This is beautiful and wonderfully written. Great imagery and...and...I can't really say anymore. The fic speaks for itself.

Beautiful.

There are a couple of sentences that could use some reworking (and I can't remember which ones... sorry X3) but it is beautiful. Lovely characterizations.

This was very cute! I enjoyed it a lot.

Aww, poor Fai! Beautifully written, deliciously fluffy, and lots of nice little metaphors... everything a good fic needs! Nice work

Aw, that was sweet. Simplistic beauty is wonderful. I really love what you did with it.

And the image of Kurogane sleeping is so cute! I wonder if he frowns in his sleep too.

Great job! Keep up the good work!

heehee. cute