I didn't really like the way Hermione was meant to save him. Sure she's super compassionate, but in this war everybody loses someone, no matter how or how many. Draco is far from the only one who is deeply traumatized. I think it is way out of character for her to be this deep into the war and still want to save the unsaveable: they will have PTSD and other issues not even time could fix. She's optimistic but she's not as naive that she could think she could "save" anyone through virginal sex. Plus this isn't her burden to rid Draco of, she has her own demons and she should the horrors of war better than Draco. It would have made more sense if she was having sex with him due to attraction or for wartime tension. Of course I'm being nit-picky about somethings. Virginity is a one-time small thing to get over in the scope of war-time events. I doubt either of them would be that attached to virginity. Besides, you are a great writer, keep up the good work!

Amazing story telling skills!

Nice portrayal of Draco's inner turmoil

loved it

Ahhhhhh I would read a whole 50 chapter or more length of this!

This was really good.

painfully lovely

I liked it.

nice

Simply painfully beautiful.

Awh. Heartbreaking and sweet.

oh man! this is heart wreanching yet beautiful. I hopw you can continue to multiple chapter

Every time I read this one I want more. I want to be fine with the ending as is, but I never am! Guess that’s the sign of a good yarn!

Powerful. But I have the option to believe in a better future! Thanks for sharing.

Intense. Compelling. Brilliant. Loved it. Thank you for sharing.