Oooh damn, how mysterious.

Too bad you stopped updating. :(((
Welp, I'll be watching over this fic anyways~

Thank you!

Gods yes Vincent, you tell her.

I'm /not/ a Cloti hater but... as a highly independent person who values her freedom, Tifa's attitude irks me. It's very stifling.

When I look at them, I see a ""husband"" who doesn't enjoy being home and a nagging ""wife""

Cloud looks like he enjoys travelling and Tifa wants a partner who would settle down with her.

I want Cloud to be happy. Let the guy do what he wants.

Smh, Cloud x Fenrir OTP.

I think my first question is; was it really Cloud's father Sephiroth is remembering or was it another, older Cloud? Since this is a different Planet, it sorta makes sense. I have to say, tilt your head and look at this fic sideways, and it just makes it even more incredibly unique! I like the idea of Cloud fighting to make the Gaia he's on a better place by making sure Sephiroth doesn't go crazy and obliterate the world! Plus, I've always liked fics where Cloud takes care of Sephiroth! There's just something so tragic about Sephiroth and Cloud is such a kind, protective person so... yeah, I just like it. Anyways, I know it's been awhile since you updated, but I'd be enthusiastically grateful if you'd take this fic up again! Please?

interesting fic really wish it had been continued

This is a brilliant and original story! I hope you plan to continue it one day, I am overcome with curiosity ;)

Very well written. For some reason was very soothing to read.

I like the idea of Sephiroth having a connection to Cloud through his father and recognises him because he looks older. I also like who you portrayed Zack in the second world. Not all fluffy and warm to a stranger but uses his charm cunningly. The fact that Clouds mute is also very interesting, he can't slip up as easily and it is much harder for people to question him about his discrepancies.

I enjoyed reading these 5 chapters. Thank you for sharing.

cloud had never admired him, he was the one of his bullies alongside with zack

This is already starting out great. You actually got me misty eyed at one point.

update please also would it be nice to bring the Vincent that cloud knows to the world where he is now? it would be so nice...

I love time travel fics, and this one is great! Sneaky Aeris is the best :)

I'm really interested in how cloud (if it even is cloud's) father ended up guarding sephiroth! Or maybe it actually WAS Cloud, but one who was born early? Such an interesting concept, I love it! :)

I love the Forrest Gump reference.

aww.. this was really good and I wish it had been continued

Great. Another abandoned story that I would very much like to see the conclusion of.

It has been quite a while but i should like to know if this particular plot bunny can be roused back to life. i have enjoyed what you have thus far and would like to see it continue. Thanks