| Reviews for Two of a Mind |
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   Currahee506 chapter 4 . 11/2/2016 update please |
| Anime100 chapter 4 . 10/3/2016 This is truly very interesting to read; please update soon |
| TangyCitrus chapter 4 . 7/4/2015 Aaw, but I was so looking forward to more! This is something I have never read nor seen before and really like the changes made to Naruto's background, his current life, and his possible future. The name is nice too, although since I'm so used to the -to at the end, I sometimes add it when it's not written in. Haha Sucks that this may never be completed seeing as the last time it was updated was in 2007. *sigh* I'll keep hoping for more though and just wait. Thank you for writing and sharing this! Take care and have fun! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/26/2015 This is one interesting story. Can't wait for the later chapters. :D |
| Eiys chapter 2 . 1/26/2015 Every second im reading this im getting more and more intrigued. can't wait till Naruto masters this power of his |
| Spectre.of.Apples chapter 4 . 7/1/2011 You haven't abandoned this, have you? O.o I hope not, because I really like it. :) Everything connects together extremely nicely and I think this is the first time I've seen Naruto as a Yamanaka...please continue! |
| Mwhahahaha18 chapter 4 . 9/28/2010 This is a really good story...I don't think I've read any of the Naruto ones like this...I defiantly like it and I really hope you come back to it soon...I can't wait to read more of it! |
| someone179 chapter 4 . 7/23/2010 i hope you'll continue this story :D |
| Ella1331 chapter 4 . 7/20/2010 FANATSTIC! But it ende far too quickly! And I'm afraid its all on this story! Pity! |
| aapaji123 chapter 4 . 1/8/2010 I've never seen anyone try something like this before. It' pretty intresting. There aren't many errors but there is one thing that I am wondering about. You have Naru and Ino refer to each other as onisan and oneesan which is the correct term but it kust sounds so formal. Onisan (brother) can be replaced by a more informal ni-san, or you can even have Ino refer to Naru as Naru-ni, which is even more informal. Likewise, oneesan (sister) can be nee-san or, for Ino, Ino-nee. You can also use Naru-ni-san or Ino-nee-san. There's nothing wrong with the terms you use, they're completly correct but they're also very formal. Naru and Ino are close so them refering to each other like that sort of bugged me. Either way, this is a great fic and I hope you update soon. |
| Star Dust of Ancient Novae chapter 4 . 1/1/2010 sweet |
| nwspor chapter 4 . 12/22/2009 cool |
| Dezzal chapter 4 . 11/19/2009 dude this is a awesome story, and if by any chance your still around you got to take it back up cause it would be a shame to see this just end here |
| The Last Rising Of The Phoenix chapter 4 . 8/7/2009 Update your story, it is absolutely brimming with pure awesomeness DON'T LET IT GO TO WASTE! |
| Black Volcarona chapter 4 . 7/20/2009 Great |
