This is beautiful and nearly poetic. Amazing work.

jeez are you depressed or what

This is... very beautiful. Your writing is slow and elegant. Perfect. Very memorable.

very good story... dark.. but good!

poignant, sweet, painful, touching

*tear falls* (and I'm not kidding) That was beautiful. Incredible writing, incredible insight into the minds of both of them. wonderful... . ~Raven

wow, that was beautiful

Beautiful, hurtful, sweet. I will keep this one to read aloud.

Formatting's messed up, though. But I don't care.

sad and beautiful...:)

wow, very poetic