The last line made me laugh.

I AM VERY FRIGHTEND!(O_o)

oh-ho! Nice!X3

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Hot damn and...doughnuts. Definitely keep up the writing!

"I didn't say anything about eating them."

*Dies*

O.0 nice! I loved the last part! Something only Kadaj would say! Loved the story!

. Lovely fic, this was funny.

Oh come on you've go to write more to that.

Yummy... VERY yummy.

The Three "Did I Like this?" Questions.

Was it good? YES!

Did Kadaj make sarcastic remarks? YES!

Did I love the visuals? VERY YES!

This is awesome... for some reason, I hav a wierd craving for jelly donuts... muahaha... (casts evil glance at Yazoo)

This is great! I love it!

What a wonderful fic. I love the brothers ever so. And those were absolutely luscious descriptions of Yazoo eating that donut. Yum. ;) Thanks for sharing!

...this was...insanely amusing. XD I loved it. tremendously.

He already had briarberry jelly staining the corners of his mouth red, as though he'd gone and killed something with his teeth again.

that line? was awesome. :D

.GAWD.

SHMEXY!

I hate Donuts. :D But here, donuts and Loz/Yazoo are an absolute perfect awesomely well I might add, top 's appearance in the end just added to the sugar/jelly smothered intensity that blew me away. Loz&Yazoo? Ten thousand times a YES. Hmm, but it can't just end there...I mean what happened to those donuts? -grins-

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Why do I find Yazoo eating a donut so incredibly hot...

It was really really good! You should write a sequel or something.

Rofl! Brilliant, simply brilliant!