Reviews for Beyond the Veil Lies Chicago?
Guest chapter 4 . 2/24
Dear Elf. Lord. Hope you haven't taken the Mickey and left loke your stuff especially the Fae . a nice touch too .hope to see more Thanks
mumphie chapter 3 . 6/22/2019
I wonder where this is going? I guess I'll never know! Sigh
torlan2003 chapter 4 . 5/11/2019
Excellent story, just enough to get me really interested haha. Thank you for writing.
jetrois chapter 4 . 4/8/2019
Fuck me sideways that was the start of an interesting story too bad it seems abandoned at not being updated in a decade.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/17/2018
Lovely crossover. Enjoyed HP&HD. Thanks for writing as much as you did. A decade on, completion seems unlikely, but I enjoyed what there was.
ironhair chapter 4 . 4/14/2018
Oh darn. Abandoned 10 years ago...it was getting interesting :(
ironhair chapter 1 . 4/14/2018
Interesting. Poor Hermione.
Soki711 chapter 4 . 5/19/2017
I wonder what happened to the author. He wrote a super story.
Corwyn chapter 4 . 4/21/2017
Loving this story. I hope you get a chance to return to it. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Fereydoun chapter 4 . 3/13/2017
I wished you hadn't dropped this story. I enjoyed it more than I thought I would.
mumphie chapter 4 . 3/1/2017
Very good blending of stories. Wish you could put a few chapters in and let us know where you are going with this. It's been nine years. I ope you are OK.
Revliledpembroke chapter 4 . 7/10/2016
Thetis? The river spirit that dunked Achilles in the River Styx? That's a hell of fairy godmother. Oh, and GIMME MORE!
Revliledpembroke chapter 3 . 7/10/2016
It just occurred to me... shouldn't Harry have called Murphy LEFT-tenant, and not lieutenant? Being British and all that.
Fez8745 chapter 4 . 5/28/2016
HP's response should be, "Oh a Fairie...Ok, Give Hermione back or i'll come to the Fairy land and kill all in my path until i find her. You have 24 hours to comply."
then just ignore her, the useless "Fairy Godmother" who did nothing his entire life.
MattKennedy chapter 4 . 1/30/2016
Rather interesting story so far, especially with the end of this chapter. :) Hope you continue it sometime.
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