the way you write the depths of their feelings was so touching.

This was excellent

*hot (sorry

So hit!

real good

So hot. This story should have happened during the TV series. Please write a sequel.

Love this! So, so terrific.

Awwww or I should say WOOOOF ! great story. I was looking for fanfics post that scene and this one is great. So much passion, so much heat, but most important you described Logan's feelings and pain and the need to hurt themselves so well that it was painful. So their need to be together was greater. To compensate what they have caused to each other.
Very well compensated I must say lOL ! Congratulations.

Beautifully written and strong imagery. So full of angst, intensity and tenderness.

I've always wondered what would have happened if Veronica did take Logan's thrown in the hallways of the Neptune Grand. This short captures the essence of LoVe's relationship from the one night.

Oh, God, that was fabulous! And hot! Such a perfect imagining of how it would have been with two people who had such incredible passion for each other. If only it had happened just that way.

And she still ends up with Duncan in the end. Ouch. How, after a night like that? Which is to say, kudos on writing a night like that.

So hot !

This story is unbelievably hot. I miss there was a second chapter where she dumps duncan

Holy crap! This is/was amazing! You are amazing.

Hot stuff! Xx