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Hey THIS IS AN AMAZING PIECE OF WRITING! your characters are awesome checking the last updated date I’ve realised that this is quite an old piece, but never the less I’m crossing my fingers hoping you’ll update. Your writing style makes it ingesting.
Great work!

Hi! I love this story so much, did you ever finish it? If so I would love to get the link to read it.

This story is amazing. It's not often i find one that holds my attention as well as this did

I check this story every few months hoping for an update. But alas...

Pleaee, please, PLEASE write more! I'm not usually a fan of OCs, but Sera is amazing, relatable, and feels like a legit character in the Xman universe. Your writing style and skill blows my mind, the way you can tell tge same scene twice with 2 povs but not repeat yourself. PLEASE COME BACK TO THIS STORY (I have a genuine need for it ; D)

sorry
neelmani174 (this site seriously hates hyperlinks.)

I'm genuinely mesmerized by your writing skill, you easily outweigh a lot of professional writers.
Alas! I think this fiction is abandoned by you, though I seriously hope that was not the case.
Anyway, I will feel honoured if I could read your other works too. If you can read this then my mail address is
God bless you with success.
Many thanks
Neel

This story is amazing, and I hope one day you'll update/finish it :) You really are an amazing writer!

I wish I could read your story but I really don't like committing to reading something that isn't finished (even though I could just read it and imagine my own ending... I just love reading what the writer actually had intended for the stories to play out). It looks like you got a lot of great reviews, hopefully you decide to come back eventually and see this through. :)

This was a really great story, I finished it in a day. I wish it were continued though as it looks like you are not updating anymore. Also the characterization for Sera was amazing. This could honestly wrk as a romance novel if not for the obvious issues of legality.

Wow, you really ought to update this story! It's really good! I really hope you haven't decided to abandon it after all these years :(

You seriously need to update this. It's amazing! And you left off when it was about to get interesting ._.

This story is going pretty good so far but I really don't like Jonathan. He has GOT to GO. Anyways I'll be waiting for the next chapter, can't wait :)

Just re-read this after several years! I know it's a long shot, but I'm hoping you find inspiration & update!